I was wondering of your opinion on this vessel i drew.
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I don't know what to do next though or how to improve and was wondering about it.
[B][U]Edit:[/U][/B] Tinypic is new host.
Rate what you like.
The ship is flat yet the sails and some of the lines have depth to them.
It's a good idea to draw things from reference once in a while.
Could you upload to a new host? I'm very keen to see it but my University proxy blocks Imageshack.
[QUOTE=Maloof?;21884543]Could you upload to a new host? I'm very keen to see it but my University proxy blocks Imageshack.[/QUOTE]
Used Tinypic, edited OP.
Wicked!
Not much to add other than be a bit more careful with your windows. You want to make them not simple squares (that cliched window [+]) and focus on their placement; at the moment they are all different shapes and not in the same line at all.
Keep it up!
body has a weird shape, you should've done some research before you started it.
A 2d ship has 3d sails and weirldy shaped flags.
The lines for windows are crooked, but some other random 2 lines are perfectly strait. Lot of consistancy errors.
wheel is all wonky, that is caused by lazyness.
Proportions and perspective needs work.
It's very.. stubby. It's not long enough.
Was I the only one who expected a Steampunk drawing, not an 18th century ship?
I expected steampunk as well, not a 16th century flagship squashed trough a baseball pitcher, where it grabbed the throwing wheels with it slightly before mating with P.Anderssons boobies.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;21918052]It's very.. stubby. It's not long enough.
Was I the only one who expected a Steampunk drawing, not an 18th century ship?[/QUOTE]
Well basically this is what the first steamships were like.
[IMG]http://totalwar.honga.net/temp/empire_units_image/empire/info/hannover/steamer.png[/IMG]
I tried basing it off this one from memory, I had 2 hours after an exam with nothing to do, so I drew it then from boredom and after somebody said they liked it I stuck it up on here.
so it's a doodle.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;21943111]so it's a doodle.[/QUOTE]
Pretty much, just wanted to see what people would think of it after a few people said they liked it.
Thread for such things exists, it's cleverly hidden under "creative work that doesn't deserve a thread"
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