• Steamship that i drew
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I was wondering of your opinion on this vessel i drew. [URL="http://i39.tinypic.com/2u7x3sm.jpg"][IMG]http://i39.tinypic.com/2u7x3sm.jpg%3C/a%3E[/IMG] [/URL][URL="http://i39.tinypic.com/2u7x3sm.jpg"] [/URL] I don't know what to do next though or how to improve and was wondering about it. [B][U]Edit:[/U][/B] Tinypic is new host. Rate what you like.
The ship is flat yet the sails and some of the lines have depth to them. It's a good idea to draw things from reference once in a while.
Could you upload to a new host? I'm very keen to see it but my University proxy blocks Imageshack.
[QUOTE=Maloof?;21884543]Could you upload to a new host? I'm very keen to see it but my University proxy blocks Imageshack.[/QUOTE] Used Tinypic, edited OP.
Wicked! Not much to add other than be a bit more careful with your windows. You want to make them not simple squares (that cliched window [+]) and focus on their placement; at the moment they are all different shapes and not in the same line at all. Keep it up!
body has a weird shape, you should've done some research before you started it. A 2d ship has 3d sails and weirldy shaped flags. The lines for windows are crooked, but some other random 2 lines are perfectly strait. Lot of consistancy errors. wheel is all wonky, that is caused by lazyness.
Proportions and perspective needs work.
It's very.. stubby. It's not long enough. Was I the only one who expected a Steampunk drawing, not an 18th century ship?
I expected steampunk as well, not a 16th century flagship squashed trough a baseball pitcher, where it grabbed the throwing wheels with it slightly before mating with P.Anderssons boobies.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;21918052]It's very.. stubby. It's not long enough. Was I the only one who expected a Steampunk drawing, not an 18th century ship?[/QUOTE] Well basically this is what the first steamships were like. [IMG]http://totalwar.honga.net/temp/empire_units_image/empire/info/hannover/steamer.png[/IMG] I tried basing it off this one from memory, I had 2 hours after an exam with nothing to do, so I drew it then from boredom and after somebody said they liked it I stuck it up on here.
so it's a doodle.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;21943111]so it's a doodle.[/QUOTE] Pretty much, just wanted to see what people would think of it after a few people said they liked it.
Thread for such things exists, it's cleverly hidden under "creative work that doesn't deserve a thread"
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