So taking influence from the various popular infographic posters circulating the web, I decided to create some snazzy handout sheets for my Politics assignment in Photoshop instead of a dull ordinary one made in MS Word.
I found the various images on the web, and added the bloodsplatters and artificial damage.
Any tips/suggestions? Go ahead and leave one! :smile:
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/PQEcZ.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/TmNQJ.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/y0fsy.png[/IMG]
I pretty much started and finished these in the past 3 hours, and it's pretty late and they're due tomorrow (I need to improve my work ethic A LOT)
Improve the blood, or remove the blood.
What game is that? looks good
Other then that, looks a bit cheap, but i guess it could work if its nothing to important.
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uh automerge
[QUOTE=johan_sm;26441476]What game is that? looks good[/QUOTE]
Dohohohoho :v:
Also WW2 ended in 45 not 42
Mind if I make a suggestion about the content?
Outcome: A whole lot of people dead on both sides and nothing to show for it. With Iraq poorer, gaining no land and losing thousands of lives, Saddam declares victory.
Use of chemical weapons maybe? Saddams huge ego playing a part in starting it?
[QUOTE=Devodiere;26441523]Mind if I make a suggestion about the content?
Outcome: A whole lot of people dead on both sides and nothing to show for it. With Iraq poorer, gaining no land and losing thousands of lives, Saddam declares victory.
Use of chemical weapons maybe? Saddams huge ego playing a part in starting it?[/QUOTE]
I know about those, I'm saving that information for the actual presentation. The handouts just give a basic outline.
And I thought I fixed the 1942 mistake, must've changed in an undo somewhere :doh:
Not a fan of the font/coloring, I can see it as being a bit more grittier.
[QUOTE=berryman13;26441670]Not a fan of the font/coloring, I can see it as being a bit more grittier.[/QUOTE]
I don't really have any designer type fonts on this laptop, and I was generally in a hurry/too lazy to find a good font. It's really just my fault :v:
Remove the blood, the font colouring is absolutely appauling and overall it's too cluttering and irritating to look at.
chill out on the effects
Under "What Was the Cause Behind the Conflict?" you're missing a closing parenthesis mark after rightful leaders.
[editline]2nd December 2010[/editline]
That and leaders shouldn't be capitalized in the first place.
I would make the sub titles that are bolded a little more obvious, maybe make them all caps or something.
Also the green and yellow provide a bad contrast. Your background pictures are too noisy. Stick with a camo pattern (make it large and simple) and put the current background as pictures.
It looks too unnatural. Have a proper font and colour scheme rather than completely random and make it less cheap by removing the blood.
Sorry :(
First war to use trenches since WWI that's a load of shit.
Even if you're talking prolonged periods of trench warfare those were present in Korea.
The effects are overdone and the font/color choice is poor. Keep it clean and throw some grunge brushes in the background if you want it "gritty". Hurts my eyes, sorry.
I know it has a lot of problems, most of them came out of mistakes I didn't bother correcting for lack of time. But I'll take some of you guys' tips for a future project :smile:
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