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First finished work with tablet Made with flash Also first time I draw the sea [IMG]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/230/8/4/Sundown_by_Ducksink.png[/IMG] [url]http://ducksink.deviantart.com/art/Sundown-175877131[/url]

I like it, Very well made.

The reflection of the large yellow blast or whatever it is doesn't make any sense. The reflection of the city sky line should appear in-front of it.

fucking aliens man there coming for me :tinfoil: also nice job

Thanks Also Tanner, that's the sun

you used too small canvas, the perspective on city and explosions is seriously fubar, shading is really shallow. Sorry, The alpha on that gray thing you used as shading was a bad idea. And I won't even mention anatomy. The water is absolutely horrible near the shore. REflections are just a cheap copy paste and flip and fuck with alpha level. It isn't a work that needed a tablet, you didn't use absolutely any feature that the tablet is for. Exept maybe pikcing your nose with it, I don't know. Look up a few tutorials on how to use tablets so that they do anything exept look shiny. If you can't draw anything, use a reference image. Or a tutorial. GEtting a tablet was bit early for you, since any of the skills you learn by fuckign about with pencils and paper show here. Practise more with pencil and paper, put the tablet away for a while.

This is not very good. I feel like you could have spent a few days on it, and it would have been a lot better.

days is a bit exessive. Maybe 2 more hours tops.

Wrong section, it goes in CC But still a nice job, making this my laptop's wallpaper. Its beautiful. I like the robot on the otherside, made me laugh , pretty good creationism. The reflection in the water is simply beautiful.

This is really awesome! It's just so beautiful.

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24261149]days is a bit exessive. Maybe 2 more hours tops.[/QUOTE] Some people can't work that fast because of lack of experience. God knows I can't do anything in 2 hours.

It's a small image.