• Cosmic Conglomerate
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I made a self-produced mixtape sorta thing. A lot of the transitions don't flow as well as I would like that too, which is why it's still a WIP but all of the songs are intended to be played in the same set. [media]http://soundcloud.com/rubriq/cosmic-conglomerate[/media] Let me know what you think of it so far. Thanks!
It had some weird distortion thing going. Exporting problems? It doesn't really matter. I like those bells, but they get a bit repetitive. The first transition was quite nice, and it has a nice eerie feel to it still. It feels a bit overreverbated, but that's okay because it works. Okay these chords at the second transition are really big and nice, maybe a bit overpowering. Wow what just happened. Okay that did not work very well. Really weird shit going on now. Okay I liked the start and then I stopped liking it
Comments as I listen. Feel like something is being made. It better amount to something soon. Synth coming in. The drum feels very odd and off in the center. The synth is a bit to grating. Now into the main section. It's interesting, though I feel like nothing is going to be changing. Oh it did, way too much reverb on that, so much that I can't at all tell what is going on. It sounds like it could be cool, but too much reverb. Good build up and what it goes into is very interesting. I think you could do something good with that part if you executed it better, because the execution on it now presents it as a weird idea. Sometimes you may want to do that at first, but add changes that make the idea seem normal and great. Transition was a bit forced. Too much of a loud air sound in the next part. So noisy. Can't tell what is going on, feels very fuzzy. Eh, ending was disappointing.
Edited some of the transitions..made the drop at the end not sound so fuzzy. Let me know if you think it sounds better.
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