In before "Go cut yourself, emo"
The meaning struck me as detailled, you obviously are not afraid to admit your inner self.
As a poem is not directly meant to rhyme, or get you money, or to make someone love you (Although making a love poem for a girl/boy is very sweet.). It is meant to show meaning, and your inner, deeper, and more emotional side. Although I usually make Comedic poems, true poems shows who you are. I guess my poems show that I'm a funny guy, and that your poems show that you've had some troubled moments and are emotionally heartbroken (Sorry for whatever happened for you to make this poem, buddy.)
Anyway, I give it a 4 out of 5.
[QUOTE=luverofJ!93;7612920]Here is my latest poem written at about 4:30 A.M. last night.
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