"Every beginning must have an end... just as every end needs a beginning. This is the law, and this is how it must be."
This is a sci-fi Choose Your Own Adventure.
Here's the basic rundown: You are on a small military escort vessel called the CSFD Sunblazer, manned by a crew of about 20. Your assigned escort is a military cargo hauler, manned by a skeleton crew of operatives and scientists. You were not given information on where the ship is headed, only told to defend the cargo hauler. The two ships are constantly connected by a secured airlock passage.
And here we go...
[img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/4263/baeadv1.png[/img]
[img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4295/baeadv2.png[/img]
[img]http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4651/baemilitarydatamap.png[/img]
I'm not too sure but I think this should be in the PW section...
Uh-oh. Where should it be?
Pixel Wars section.
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You've done a good job with it though, good pixel work and a good Introduction. :)
Whoopsie. Alright, well, forget this thread. I'll start a new one in the proper place.
This is pixel art and it's not traditional PW, keep it here.
I actually think it could even be viable to have in the General Discussion, you'll get more viewers there and I am sure people would enjoy it there.
Ask a global moderator to move this thread to General Discussion.
You should probably make the picture bigger, not because of the art (which is fine, I love these kind of things) but more because of the text is a bit too small right now.
Let's check out the Mess Hall, we're probably hungry and I'm sure there's atleast one more crew member in the same position as us.
Alright, here this thread stays. This is the active thread.
So, suggestions start now (Gregah, you can change yours now if you want to).
ooor not
I apologize.
no i just think it belongs moreso in the pixel wars section
especially since you didnt even use msPaint
My suggestion still stays :
[quote]Let's check out the Mess Hall, we're probably hungry and I'm sure there's atleast one more crew member in the same position as us.[/quote]
Make the picture bigger too, the art can stay the way it is, just make sure the text is a bit bigger.
Bigger picture aye.
Sorry, Retyuoligkl :/
[QUOTE=Retyuoligkl;22776561]no i just think it belongs moreso in the pixel wars section
especially since you didnt even use msPaint[/QUOTE]
How is that not MSP?
Also PW is for PW, and those PWRPs. This is interactive, done with pixel art. I'd say MSP or GD for this.
[QUOTE=Fippe;22777542]I'd say MSP or GD for this.[/QUOTE]
Well, here it is, in MSP. Ta-daaa.
Now there's a bunch of off-topic discussion clogging the kick-off thread. I am disappoint.
Speaking of larger...
[img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4263/baeadv1.png[/img]
[img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/4295/baeadv2.png[/img]
Have a small conversation with Chris about your strange nightmares, proceed to meet Selena and Serena and the other crew members. Find out the captain is missing, later discover him impaled on the ship radar antennas after exiting the ship to check out why the radar isn't working. Try not to get knifed.
Edit: This scene reminds me of something I am now referring to.
You're doing it wrong
Fap in that mo-fo's face.
Show him who's boss.
[QUOTE=Falchion;22779413]Have a small conversation with Chris about your strange nightmares, proceed to meet Selena and Serena and the other crew members. Find out the captain is missing, later discover him impaled on the ship radar antennas after exiting the ship to check out why the radar isn't working. Try not to get knifed.
Edit: This scene reminds me of something I am now referring to.[/QUOTE]
With a machete. By the dead captain.
Serious time: Get out of this room and go to a mess hall or something
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