• A shitty drawing of a marine
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Here's the hand-able version from a cool bro named mokkan13 [img]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae190/mokkan13/marine2.jpg[/img] It took me week or so because I kept adding stupid details Full thing: [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Drawing_1.png[/url] I might line art it.
wow that's very good... but just some cc I think that the stock on what seems to be a Scar-H with a Holographic sight is a bit off line but other than that this is one of the best drawings I have seen, although the sling off the stock seems to not return to the barrel as would be common, but we can let it go as the amount of detail is amazing
It's a scar-L :D the sling doesn't return to the barrel it goes to the left side slightly above the rail. As for the holographic sight I think they let you choose your sight as long as yo're paying for it.
i was just guessing on the type of Scar seeing as you have psn i was guessing you got the idea for the Scar from mw2, ok about the sling as most common assault rifles have the sling returning around the barrel, an the holographic was just a lucky guess but its still a good picture never the less
Could use some shading, and work on your facial expressions.
I was going to line art it then color/shade after that.
Came in expecting a 12 yr old drawing. I was pleasantly surprised
I find it crazy how people can draw that and say it's shitty, but I try and draw a dragon or something and it looks like an aborted goat fetus.
Work on the face, mostly the nose. Also, needs more shading. And please do resize before uploading.
Better then i thought is was going to be, nice work. :D
I think it's mostly fine, but his face is a little bit :downs:. You need to work on faces.
[QUOTE=Whats This?v4;24497780]Came in expecting a 12 yr old drawing. I was pleasantly surprised[/QUOTE]
Anime face.
[QUOTE=Back_Slash;24497078]It's a scar-L :D the sling doesn't return to the barrel it goes to the left side slightly above the rail. As for the holographic sight I think they let you choose your sight as long as yo're paying for it.[/QUOTE] no actually, you get standardised ecuipment. IF your CO manages to get a deal going with higher ups, you can fetch some attatchments from the armory, if he approves what shit you lug with you. Sometimes you can buy your own shit too. In our army only rifle is standard issue for designated marksmen, they have to get their optics themselves and all the other shit too. AS for the drawing, that shit is loading. Learn to resize.
[QUOTE=strayebyrd;24499333]I find it crazy how people can draw that and say it's shitty, but I try and draw a dragon or something and it looks like an aborted goat fetus.[/QUOTE] That would be interesting to see. --- OP: Looks all right I'd like to see it line arted.
Glad to see you have taken advice into consideration. First things I noticed: ScarL is quite badly misproportioned, especially the stock, which is at a completely wrong angle anyway, his left hand seems to be painfully bent, everything is too unclean and sketchy, face makes him look like he trolls regulary on /k/, fingers seem too short and stubby, looks like his hand was sewn together from other hands. His pose. What the fuck, looks like he's recoveering from 4hour shitting session, and I can't shake the feeling that left hand is misproportioned. I don't get what's on his right shoulder, his crotch plate is stupidly tiny, seems like he stole his shirt from hagrid, I'm pretty sure that's useless shit he's got on his right leg, head his huge, gargantuan, the sling looks liek it's made of sheet metal. And it's abso-fucking-lutely lacking any shading. It's not even lineart, it's a sketch. Learn your terms. Dont' try and excuse yourself by adding "shitty" in the title. I see no fecal matter anywhere. If it's shitty, it goes to drawings that dont' deserve a thread thread. Now, I'd say you should spend more time practisin drawin poses of humans and shit. I'd say use posemaniacs.com 30second drawing thing and if you can't get it, look some anatomy tutorials and such. Find some good non-manga face tutorials. There were some over on drawspace.com. Some good subjects other than those cannon fodder would be nice too. Also I don't recall seeing any of your drawings having feet... [editline]09:29AM[/editline] [QUOTE=KiLlErHaDoCk;24496692]wow that's very good... but just some cc I think that the stock on what seems to be a Scar-H with a Holographic sight is a bit off line but other than that this is one of the best drawings I have seen, although the sling off the stock seems to not return to the barrel as would be common, but we can let it go as the amount of detail is amazing[/QUOTE] also I don't like those clots from other sections that come here to bump some random thread.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24509971]Glad to see you have taken advice into consideration. First things I noticed: ScarL is quite badly misproportioned, especially the stock, which is at a completely wrong angle anyway, his left hand seems to be painfully bent, everything is too unclean and sketchy, face makes him look like he trolls regulary on /k/, fingers seem too short and stubby, looks like his hand was sewn together from other hands.[/quote] I've been trying to work on the fingers the scar I had multiple reference photos from leatherneck magazine with multiple angles and shooters ,guess what? the stock looks like that cause it collapses. [quote]His pose. What the fuck, looks like he's recoveering from 4hour shitting session, and I can't shake the feeling that left hand is misproportioned.[/quote] He is kind of hunched over, Giving less of a target. Yeah I suck at drawing hands from the side [quote]I don't get what's on his right shoulder, his crotch plate is stupidly tiny, seems like he stole his shirt from hagrid, I'm pretty sure that's useless shit he's got on his right leg, head his huge, gargantuan, the sling looks liek it's made of sheet metal.[/quote] The thing on his right shoulder is loop thing that I don't get why it's there. With the shirt I had reference XD from leatherneck magazine also it's the helmet that makes it look big I actually tried 3 different times before getting it right then the helmet size screws it up. [quote]And it's abso-fucking-lutely lacking any shading.[/quote] I WAS going to lineart it once I got the time. [quote]It's not even lineart, it's a sketch. Learn your terms. Dont' try and excuse yourself by adding "shitty" in the title. I see no fecal matter anywhere. If it's shitty, it goes to drawings that dont' deserve a thread thread.[/quote] Do you even read... I said I might line art it. [quote]Now, I'd say you should spend more time practisin drawin poses of humans and shit. I'd say use posemaniacs.com 30second drawing thing and if you can't get it, look some anatomy tutorials and such. Find some good non-manga face tutorials. There were some over on drawspace.com. Some good subjects other than those cannon fodder would be nice too. Also I don't recall seeing any of your drawings having feet...[/quote] way to ram it home...I know that I suck. and it's not a manga style. I guess you don't see that the eyes aren't huge and the facial features? [editline]09:29AM[/editline] [quote]also I don't like those clots from other sections that come here to bump some random thread.[/QUOTE] hurf derf elitism. [editline]04:37PM[/editline] [QUOTE=GodKing;24508244]Anime face.[/QUOTE] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvdf5n-zI14[/media] You're bad at this aren't you. [editline]04:38PM[/editline] also thanks for the comments all.
Scar stock doesn't look like that from any angle. I double checked it and it's angle is way too steep.
Needs Fall camouflage, need 250 headshots
[img]http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/6871/bakedmarine.png[/img] Feels good man Seriously though he looks baked as hell. Eyes could use work, face alignment looks off, but the geometry is awesome. Just the level of detail put into the shapes alone forgives everything. I can't stop looking at that SCAR.
[QUOTE=Back_Slash;24495842]Thumbed because it's fookin' huge. It took me week or so because I kept adding stupid details [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Drawing_1.png[/img_thumb] I might line art it.[/QUOTE] Jesus christ, you weren't kidding when you said it was huge. Pretty good, only thing I don't like is the face doesn't seem to suit the drawing, it's A) not as serious as it should be, B) looks very anime, as said.
Shit-dickingly ballstickles, it hasn't loaded in five minutes, how fucking big is this image? and my internet is good, for Aussie standards.
4699x 65something something. at Punchgroin PHD coem to think of it, it does look a little bit like the yara nai ka face thanks for the comments.
you should resize it
it looks great
[QUOTE=Fire Kracker;24551376]you should resize it[/QUOTE] never.
[QUOTE=broo20;24538693]Shit-dickingly ballstickles, it hasn't loaded in five minutes, how fucking big is this image? and my internet is good, for Aussie standards.[/QUOTE] 4966x6908 I'm Aussie and it took me like a minute [editline]12:01PM[/editline] I'll post a much smaller version which people can hopeflly actually open. [editline]12:13PM[/editline] Jesus christ. Resizing that image: photoshop used half a gig of RAM Firefox used 300mb just keeping this tab open My computer nearly crashed 3 times Please add this to the OP, it's much more manageable [IMG_THUMB]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae190/mokkan13/marine2.jpg[/IMG_THUMB] [editline]12:15PM[/editline] and check this out. It's nearly 100mb [IMG]http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae190/mokkan13/goddamn-3.png[/IMG]
Lol thanks My computer has a 512mb graphics card and 2gbs of ram and the upload didn't take long so I wasn't thinking when I uploaded. also wierd my computer said it was 22 mb :X
[QUOTE=Back_Slash;24594001]wierd my computer said it was 22 mb :X[/QUOTE] That's a bit of a worry.
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