A thug tries to mug a jogger, but can he keep up with his pace? (Im not good at descriptions I just make the videos...)
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmW0Yx9R-1g[/media]
There's much here that can be improved on. You need better actors with more knowledge of film, near the start the guy in the blue shirt has his back facing the camera, for instance. Better actors in general would be good too, I noticed that many of the lines felt forced. Also the guy in the blue shirt was still alive after being stabbed 50 times, which was odd.
In terms of your videography, I felt that the camera lingered in the same position for way too long nearer the start, and the last scene felt more like a recording of a high school beating than anything else.
On a side note, I think this should have been posted in the videos section.
lol nice keep at it
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