An electro track I made a while ago, looking for some feedback. Enjoy!
[media]http://soundcloud.com/wakethephantom/shockwave[/media]
Very nice, but drums are way too loud.
I like your kick.
I'll critique as I listen.
The opening has a nice atmosphere, good synth. The pad or string synth that comes in at about :30 is a little overbearing, turn it down a bit so that it fades into the mix. Nice sidechain on it by the way. Good percussion track around 1:30 that kicks in. Adds some great velocity and drive to the track. Well, the first climax is tapering off. It's pretty repetitive at this point. Try adding in another hook or synth to back up what you have. Oh hey, one just came in. I still thing that string lead is too overbearing, it needs to be turned down a bit.
Overall, this has a nice sound to it, there's energy and drive to the track. The percussion is interesting considering that it's not club samples but sounds rather like an acoustic kit. Good song, I'm liking it, but develop it just a bit more.
[QUOTE=Silent-Bob;29721005]I'll critique as I listen.
The opening has a nice atmosphere, good synth. The pad or string synth that comes in at about :30 is a little overbearing, turn it down a bit so that it fades into the mix. Nice sidechain on it by the way. Good percussion track around 1:30 that kicks in. Adds some great velocity and drive to the track. Well, the first climax is tapering off. It's pretty repetitive at this point. Try adding in another hook or synth to back up what you have. Oh hey, one just came in. I still thing that string lead is too overbearing, it needs to be turned down a bit.
Overall, this has a nice sound to it, there's energy and drive to the track. The percussion is interesting considering that it's not club samples but sounds rather like an acoustic kit. Good song, I'm liking it, but develop it just a bit more.[/QUOTE]
Useful review, I suppose the string is a little bit loud. hearts all around
Nice Song
I swear I've heard something very similar to this. The melody is very similar.
[QUOTE=Yur|ko;29775919]I swear I've heard something very similar to this. The melody is very similar.[/QUOTE]
Yes, I had that feeling too. It's weird though because I haven't had any inspiration by other music.
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