hey guys i made this video and i would like to share it with you :D
please put comments on the youtube page ;)
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWgd6Rsv_20[/media]
Thank you :D
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You're trolling, right?
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lITBGjNEp08[/media]
It was terrible after the rap.
Please try to be original.
If you are trolling: Good luck with that.
Get the fuck out of here.
More please.
wth dudes?!
im not trolling and it is titally original -.-
Absolutely SHIT.
That's all I have to say. Not even the framerate is good.
Uh hey, guys, why are you guys so rude to him? He was asking for constructive criticism (I guess) and you just tell him to get the fuck out?
[QUOTE=ggutlansky;23754498]wth dudes?!
im not trolling and it is titally original -.-[/QUOTE]
I suggest working on some stuff.
Notes:
Better recording software
Better editing software
Learn to edit
Originality
Grammar
Spelling
Brainpower
That should be good enough.
Good job, try to improve your fps.
[QUOTE=Lyoko2;23754521]Good job, try to improve your fps.[/QUOTE]
It wasn't good. The humour wasn't funny at all. As far as "random" videos go, I've seen far better than this as far as jokes are concerned.
Yeah, the jokes were NOT funny at ALL
Also, "HURR SO RANDOM!1 XD" videos aren't funny, never were, and never will be.
You guys fuck off.
You don't like it?
MAKE A BETTER ONE.
I'm sure I'm not like DasBoSchitt, but i think its better then you can do -__-
so if you dont have anything good to say, just FUCK OFF.
[QUOTE=ggutlansky;23754599]You guys fuck off.
[b]You don't like it?
MAKE A BETTER ONE.[/b]
I'm sure I'm not like DasBoSchitt, but i think its better then you can do -__-
so if you dont have anything good to say, just FUCK OFF.[/QUOTE]
Film critics doesn't have to direct movies to be able to give a movie critic.
Just as how you don't have to be a chef to think that something tastes awful.
Oh, and DasBoSchitt isn't very funny, either. But that's just my opinion.
[QUOTE=ggutlansky;23754599]You guys fuck off.
You don't like it?
MAKE A BETTER ONE.
I'm sure I'm not like DasBoSchitt, but i think its better then you can do -__-
so if you dont have anything good to say, just FUCK OFF.[/QUOTE]
Ah, now this is colloquially known as "suicide".
If you can't take critique, :fuckoff:
Let me list exactly what is wrong with this video.
1. It's not funny.
2. The style of video (LOL SO RANDUM HURR :downs:) is overused.
3. The framerate is very, very poor. Do you know what framerate is?
4. There is no antialiasing.
5. The resolution is poor.
6. The editing is disjointed at best, and the lack of decent sound quality ruins it further.
7. Using rap music as music for your intro as opposed to say, writing something yourself or using music that fits the occasion (like videogame music remixes) is also in poor taste.
8. Several of the jokes are pretty much direct copies of the song's origins. Like "dick in a box". It would have been funnier to show a man called Dick inside a box. Then it is dick in a box, but not in the way originally intended.
[QUOTE=ggutlansky;23754599]You guys fuck off.
You don't like it?
MAKE A BETTER ONE.
I'm sure I'm not like DasBoSchitt, but i think its better then you can do -__-
so if you dont have anything good to say, just FUCK OFF.[/QUOTE]
why would you post a video anywhere and not expect criticism
[QUOTE=RixxzIV;23754616]Film critics doesn't have to direct movies to be able to give a movie critic.
Just as how you don't have to be a chef to think that something tastes awful.
Oh, and DasBoSchitt isn't very funny, either. But that's just my opinion.[/QUOTE]
It is hard to make you laugh isnt it?? -__-
Also you're a filthy pirate.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ajcKvxFD2Fg[/media]
HOW I GET GMOD WITHOUT VIRUS OR TORANT PLZ WHER I DOWNLOAD
[editline]10:00AM[/editline]
Also on his account is yet another reupload of Peanut Butter Jelly Time.
I think we're dealing with either a criminal mind, master troll, or complete fool here, gentlemen.
well guys, i DO expect criticism, but not something like "THis is a SHITTY MOVIE YOU SHOULD DIE!!"
more like: you need to edit it better, pay attention to the fps, make it more funny and maybe more original...
but the point IS to show the lyrics of the song, not to put someone named dick inside a box -.-
[QUOTE=ggutlansky;23754731]well guys, i DO expect criticism, but not something like "THis is a SHITTY MOVIE YOU SHOULD DIE!!"
more like: you need to edit it better, pay attention to the fps, make it more funny and maybe more original...
but the point IS to show the lyrics of the song, not to put someone named dick inside a box -.-[/QUOTE]
But everyone knows the lyrics of that song. Everyone KNOWS the joke already. It was in the music video. Mix it up a bit. Change it.
[QUOTE=ggutlansky;23754731]well guys, i DO expect criticism, but not something like "THis is a SHITTY MOVIE YOU SHOULD DIE!!"
more like: you need to edit it better, pay attention to the fps, make it more funny and maybe more original...
but the point IS to show the lyrics of the song, not to put someone named dick inside a box -.-[/QUOTE]
it's much faster to type out "it sucks" than write a novella listing everything wrong with it
Why on earth would you make a video asking YouTube to find something for you? The majority of YouTubers are idiots, and the few people who have an IQ above 2 have better things to do than give a 12 year old a link to an illegal torrent.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ajcKvxFD2Fg[/media]
i ragequit
Also, if people are saying things like "It sucks." "g0 kilur slef l0l!!!@", you should probably put your video under extreme scrutiny. Pick out all the flaws that you see, and take advice from others.
That was horrible.
[QUOTE=robowurmz;23754749]But everyone knows the lyrics of that song. Everyone KNOWS the joke already. It was in the music video. Mix it up a bit. Change it.[/QUOTE]
now THATS the criticism i expect
[QUOTE=rabbid666;23754839]op, [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/#"]View YouTUBE video[/URL]
[URL]http://youtube.com/watch?v=48rz8udZBmQ[/URL]
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you're not improving the quality of videos on this thread
One thing I didn't like was the loud as hell 'beep' in between the clips. Please lower that volume a bit.
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