(1st this story is a tribute to Alan Wake and it is pretty good one because lots of people like this story so far)
It's about a person named Tom Casey who finds out that he and his brother are characters of a writer's story (Alex casey books) But a mafia is trying to stop Tom and Alan from knowing the truth, Not just that but that mafia release a psychopath named The enforcer who is atleast 9 feet tall.
how does it sound so far.
but I'm not releasing it online because I would rather type with a typewriter than a laptop.
not quite twilight quality, but it does sparkle in it's own way! keep going!
It's not twilight , why the heck would it be twilight quality
I would say that you probably need to stop right where you are, but that would sound cynical and unfair because I haven't seen your writing style.
But seriously just stop.
The fact that you decide to describe that the "Mafia enforcer" must be at least "9 feet tall" exhibits pure puerility to me.
Stick 2 ur dai job.
First thing that came to mind "Alan Wake" (from the title that is)
not a mafia!
I am Alan Wake.
I'm a writer.
Dude, as an amateur writer, ignore these fucking comments, and just write your own story and take pride with it.
Hey man I wrote a theme song for your story but I haven't recorded it because I don't like microphones. It's sort of dark and gloomy. What do you think of it so far?
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