Techno song I've been working on in FL Studio (8bit/Chiptune)

[Hahabynow]

I've been working on this on and off for the past week or so. This is my first real material I have produced using Fruity Loops so please give your opinion and any tips that you may have.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/a_dying_breed/p10x-new-intro[/media]

Edit: I basically redid the whole song.

[Peppermint]

This is pretty good for a cool, fun little 8bit tune!
My only tip is keep making stuff.

[quinaking]

The intro could use some work, but the rest sounds really cool!

[tsar]

Intro isn't too great but everything else is awesome.

[Hahabynow]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on changing the intro and smoothing it out.

Just uploaded fixed up version.

[Hahabynow]

Just change the intro and other parts completely. Please give it another listen (or a listen) and tell me what you think now.

[Don Knotts]

This reminds me of the mid-stage conveyor belt levels from Plants VS Zombies for some reason.

And I love that.

[quinaking]

Intro is much better, as is everything else. Great job!

[hugg]

This is a REALLY good song, good job!

[Hahabynow]

Sweet.. Glad you guys like it.

[Hahabynow]

Intro redone again. Also added some more effects and worked with the levels a bit. I think this is the final product.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/a_dying_breed/p10x-new-intro[/media]