It's got good and bad. I mainly think the strange pose and certain proportion issues make him look kind of goofy. Unless that was what you were going for ...
He looks like a wannabe Mountie that got creative with his outfit.
It'd help to work on proportions and anatomical structure. It's a nice concept, but it's not nearly finished. For example the legs.
Ya, it's a lot better already. The only improvement I can still suggest is that his waist should be beefed up more. Looks like he is wearing a corset.
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[quote=Smeetin]Looks like he is wearing a corset.[/quote]
magic belt
you know there's an agree rating now right
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@ serva
the arms look a bit short in both versions. and something about the torso seems off, looks good otherwise
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Red = The walkie talkie's antenna isn't straight
Green = Inconsistent button count/size
Pale Blue = Shoulder cloth height isn't similar on both sides. On his left side, it's fairly loose. On the side with the circle, it's fairly skin-tight. Choose one style.
Light Blue = The cuffs (or inner sleeves) have no backside to them, make sure they connect up behind the hand.
There's also a couple of other minor things throughout, but it's pretty dang nice. At first I even thought it was a 3D model.
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