Making a fake ad poster, need imput - General

I just want it to have more pizazz, you know what I mean? But I can't think of much else. [IMG]http://i634.photobucket.com/albums/uu66/MewMewMedic/CanBONK.png[/IMG]

I think It's pretty awesome just how it is.

[QUOTE=bigbob;24530855]I think It's pretty awesome just how it is.[/QUOTE] I think there's too much blank (Metal part) space and the font doesnt really pop. But thanks!

Thats actually fucking awesome.

[QUOTE=and Dan was boobies;24531103]Thats actually fucking awesome.[/QUOTE] I thought so. I think that the simplicity in design adds to the awesomesness of the whole. [editline]01:21AM[/editline] would you mind telling me how you did that (in a simple manner)

[QUOTE=bigbob;24531159]I thought so. I think that the simplicity in design adds to the awesomesness of the whole. [editline]01:21AM[/editline] would you mind telling me how you did that (in a simple manner) [editline]01:25AM[/editline] also, shouldn't this be in Creationism Corner?[/QUOTE] [url]http://colorburned.com/2010/07/create-a-refreshing-beer-themed-poster-design-in-photoshop.html[/url] I used that tutorial above, with a bit of modification. Sorry if I posted this in the wrong forum!

thanks

Aha! See! I told you that you would go far. I stated that proudly and I got rated dumb! Good job it is very very cool.

wait why's this in contests? should I move this to CC? :raise:

dai, did you read it my second post, last edit

Yeh, I usually ask first in case people have a reason for soemthing being somewhere. Ah, well, movin' it.

you hate contentless bumps, right dai?

The font i reckon.. why not use the same font as on the BAWWWWWNK drink can?>

I think the liquid should be colored.

It would be really cool if the liquid was colored, but also if the letters were neon or also liquid-looking.

This is great! I think it's fine the way it is. If you're still thinking of adding more stuff, keep it simple, because it already looks amazing.

Well it looks pretty good maybe have a radiation spill (glowing green) around it, since it IS atomic punch. And increase the glow around the can a bit, i think. Since you think the wall is bare, maybe add some gunshot marks?

It's nice, but you can see where the red meets the rim at the top of the can.

Give it a few lines of copy.

Change the font to: [url]http://www.dafont.com/nite-club.font[/url] [url]http://www.dafont.com/street-cred.font[/url] [url]http://www.dafont.com/dymaxion-script.font[/url]

Keep the background as-is, you don't want distraction from the main part, and that's one of the strong points this really has.

This is amazing. Can I get that wallpaper sized? (Please?)

the water looks awesome

I think it's the amount of empty space you put in between the Bonk and the label.

I wish I can have Isotopes in my soda.... ::(: Criticism: I would change the color of the water to the color of the drink

I don't like the punchline font or the coloured glow around the can.

[QUOTE=Phyxius;24560829]This is amazing. Can I get that wallpaper sized? (Please?)[/QUOTE] I'll try. what dimmensions do you want?

[QUOTE=LightSwitchRave;24573839]I'll try. what dimmensions do you want?[/QUOTE] 1920x1080 or 1680x1050 (whichever is easier). Thanks! [editline]03:41PM[/editline] [QUOTE=Ayron;24570666]I would change the color of the water to the color of the drink[/QUOTE] Also, this.

Current Version [IMG]http://i634.photobucket.com/albums/uu66/MewMewMedic/CanBONk2.jpg[/IMG]

My lord, that looks amazing. Personally I would darken the back wall (Not the floor), as to bring out the can. Something about it doesn't make it look that cold to me, might actually be over saturated.