• A Commercial I Made for School
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I think it's pretty awesome, but I'm biased. Anything I could fix about it? Also I'm the one in the black & white plaid flannel. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cR5pfVVjGas[/media] I'm pretty proud of it :) [editline]18th February 2011[/editline] Also, the good part is at the end.
youre cute
lol
You're pretty cute
[img]http://www.insidesocal.com/friendlyfire/5front.jpg[/img] I want half a Golden Shamrock and two Green Shamrocks please.
[QUOTE=propan;28120409]youre cute[/QUOTE] Thanks sweetheart, you should post in Gaypunch and talk with other fellow faggots like me!
Sorry can't do, im saving for crysis 2.
PM me and donate to my paypal, although I can't promise it will end up being used for the fundraiser ;)
You guys don't seem to be very ecstatic, the sound quality is pretty bad with background noise so it takes attention away from what you're trying to say. I also think the first three photos could be of equal size, it would just match up nicer and give more to the presentation but that's very minor. Still, gets the point across and the end is silly fun.
Yeah, the bitches in the background wouldn't stfu even though we were OBVIOUSLY filming -_- And haha, I was just trying to stay focused and not fuck up. That was like the 11th time trying to do it. :v: Thanks!
Needs something fun and excitimng to wake the audience up.
i love how you used that song from that animal shelter commercial
Make a platinum shamrock for $20
[QUOTE=MagicBurrito;28122022]i love how you used that song from that animal shelter commercial[/QUOTE] Yeah haha, I had to put a tear-jerker in there. I wanted to introduce myself right after and be like "Hello, my name is Sarah McLachlan" in a soft voice like she does, and say it while petting a muscular dystrophy child. Haha. [editline]18th February 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=The Spie;28122134]Make a platinum shamrock for $20[/QUOTE] I would if I could. [editline]18th February 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Lazyboy0337;28121957]Needs something fun and excitimng to wake the audience up.[/QUOTE] Eh, delivering the message is more important. I tried to make it interesting to watch, while still covering all the information needing to be said.
You should bang the chick
[QUOTE=Lazyboy0337;28121957]Needs something fun and excitimng to wake the audience up.[/QUOTE] have a chick with bare tits stand in the background
Let us top off this masterpiece with... Sarah mclaughlin rotc represent
[QUOTE=Dr. Fishtastic;28122363]have a chick with bare tits stand in the background[/QUOTE] no.. even better... [I]bear[/I] tits
[QUOTE=MagicBurrito;28122752]no.. even better... [I]bear[/I] tits[/QUOTE] Genius!
ahahah that was great
Hook me up with that girl from the video and I'll buy all the shamrocks :colbert:
The girl from the video has really nice tits, you can't tell that by the video though. But no, I am not hooking you up with her :colbert:
at 0:37 and 0:44 it looks like you're checking the two guys out
[QUOTE=The very best;28125471]at 0:37 and 0:44 it looks like you're checking the two guys out[/QUOTE] They're both pretty cute. I don't know if I'd date them though. And I don't think I was purposely checking them out, lol.
You should fuck that girl tonight bro
I'd bang that chick with my golden shamrock!
[img]http://gyazo.com/5a28061a376c0d44820a9fd7d33e4d4d.png[/img] :gizz:
now I know what highschool you go to :q: [editline]21st February 2011[/editline] [img] http://filesmelt.com/dl/hgyiu_o_GIFSoup.com_.gif[/img]
The sound when you're speaking is very quiet, I could barely understand you or the chick. I think if you and the girl were standing in front of a black background telling the audience about your product, and then cutting to scenes with people buying shamrocks while you speak over the clips, you would be able to get a better angle and have less lead upstaging. Another thing, why were you giving the people money to buy a shamrock? As an exaggeration, I would believe that YOU are giving out money so people will donate, instead of using my own to do so. While that is most likely false, it does send out wrong signals to the brain. Also, just a tip for filming: Never have an actor face his back towards the audience. It causes the audience to focus on the other actor and thus make what you're saying less memorable.
It should have gone like this. "WHAT'S UP BITCHES WANT A FUCKING SHAMROCK HELL YEAH" then you'd fuck that nicole chick and jizz green.
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