• MineCraft: PigMen a.k.a. Story of the Nether
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Hey guys, this is a fictional story/song I made about the origins of the Nether and the creatures within it. Hope you like it, I tried something different in this, especially the very beginning, I think it is kind of cool. Follow along the lyrics while you listen! [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vjku-VKvLGc[/media] Lyrics: One day you come across a cave which you explore all alone Hours have gone by and by and you come across some mossy cobblestone You get out your pickaxe and dig your way in You find this is where somebody else has been But the chest inside is still there You wonder why they didn't care Upon opening this lonely chest Theres one thing you find inside A journal thats shaped like a disk with the name on it Dr. Leon Sisk The first page is a biography Archaeology, Mineralogy, Photology, Zoology A smart man no less, How did he become journaless? The last page of his journal however looks to be of a daring endeavour A door of some kind with phantom flames And a man and a pig strapped together Instructions were left on that very last page the journal itself looks to be of some age But I gathered materials for several days This door, this portal, I soon shall raise I am building something different Wheres this doctor can I save him I am done I add the fire Can I save this doctor from death Is he here in this place he writes about Is he in the nether... I step into his world I see his experiments gone wrong its a hellish place, there are things to face and thats when I see the pigmen Its so sad its so sad its so sad poor souls they didn't stand a chance I wonder if they're miners or if they're zombies in a trance I found him dead... ... and alone. The End
Keep up the awesome work!
Cool song Bobby.
I hate this guy so much, he's songs are ok but I hate him so much for some unknown reason.
[QUOTE=FPSMango;26011302]I hate this guy so much, he's songs are ok but I hate him so much for some unknown reason.[/QUOTE] Thanks for letting me know, because now for some unknown reason I hate you so much. ...lol?
This actually makes sense, i mean when you think about it: what if you, the only miner left in the minecraft world, were the son of this scientist? He left you there to explore the world he wished he could have stayed in, a perfect place. Whilst your father lay dead in the Nether, murdered by his own experiments. However not all was lost for this scientist, he left his notes in that chest for his son to find so that his son could see what his father created.
[QUOTE=Turkey72;26016454]This actually makes sense, i mean when you think about it: what if you, the only miner left in the minecraft world, were the son of this scientist? He left you there to explore the world he wished he could have stayed in, a perfect place. Whilst your father lay dead in the Nether, murdered by his own experiments. However not all was lost for this scientist, he left his notes in that chest for his son to find so that his son could see what his father created.[/QUOTE] Yeah. Or you just mine and stuff.
Love you brosef, but not the greatest lyrics ever.
And here I was thinking that when you said before "this'll be the last minecraft song" you actually meant it. This is shit like the last one. Can't you find inspiration elsewhere? [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] Read the lyrics back [quote=Dumb ass shit]A smart man no less, How did he become journaless?[/quote] Oh fuck, are you kidding me? [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] Also you denied it last time, I didn't believe you then, but this time you definitely used pitch correction and it still sounds dull and uninspiring. [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Turkey72;26016454]This actually makes sense, i mean when you think about it: what if you, the only miner left in the minecraft world, were the son of this scientist? He left you there to explore the world he wished he could have stayed in, a perfect place. Whilst your father lay dead in the Nether, murdered by his own experiments. However not all was lost for this scientist, he left his notes in that chest for his son to find so that his son could see what his father created.[/QUOTE] That makes no more sense than any other random story you could come up with. Here's a new one. what if you were raped by hades and it split your anus open (explaining the funny walking animation)? So you wouldn't tell anyone he made a whole new blocky world and he left you there to explore it like he explored your ass. Whilst your father lay being raped in the Nether, his ass full of Satans creative juices, you are left to try and save your family but you don't know how cause all you do is mine all day long. However not all was lost for your father, he was actually secretly gay and loves his new life as Hades sex slave. Just as viable.
I really applaud the effort more than anything. The lyrics and rhythm I would give a D. Low qual broseph.
[QUOTE=Lightbourne;26019949]And here I was thinking that when you said before "this'll be the last minecraft song" you actually meant it. This is shit like the last one. Can't you find inspiration elsewhere? [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] Read the lyrics back Oh fuck, are you kidding me? [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] Also you denied it last time, I didn't believe you then, but this time you definitely used pitch correction and it still sounds dull and uninspiring. [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] That makes no more sense than any other random story you could come up with. Here's a new one. what if you were raped by hades and it split your anus open (explaining the funny walking animation)? So you wouldn't tell anyone he made a whole new blocky world and he left you there to explore it like he explored your ass. Whilst your father lay being raped in the Nether, his ass full of Satans creative juices, you are left to try and save your family but you don't know how cause all you do is mine all day long. However not all was lost for your father, he was actually secretly gay and loves his new life as Hades sex slave. Just as viable.[/QUOTE] Haha. Why're you being an ass? There are so many better ways to criticize someones work than to be this foul about it.
I didn't know you were a Facepuncher, Why don't I ever see you in the Minecraft Thread?
[QUOTE=ManningQB18;26023847]I didn't know you were a Facepuncher, Why don't I ever see you in the Minecraft Thread?[/QUOTE] No one reads the Arts and Creativity Sub section haha. [editline]13th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Lightbourne;26019949]And here I was thinking that when you said before "this'll be the last minecraft song" you actually meant it. This is shit like the last one. Can't you find inspiration elsewhere? [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] Read the lyrics back Oh fuck, are you kidding me? [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] Also you denied it last time, I didn't believe you then, but this time you definitely used pitch correction and it still sounds dull and uninspiring. [editline]12th November 2010[/editline] That makes no more sense than any other random story you could come up with. Here's a new one. what if you were raped by hades and it split your anus open (explaining the funny walking animation)? So you wouldn't tell anyone he made a whole new blocky world and he left you there to explore it like he explored your ass. Whilst your father lay being raped in the Nether, his ass full of Satans creative juices, you are left to try and save your family but you don't know how cause all you do is mine all day long. However not all was lost for your father, he was actually secretly gay and loves his new life as Hades sex slave. Just as viable.[/QUOTE] Here lets start over. Hi there. My name is Bobby, whats yours? [editline]13th November 2010[/editline] [QUOTE=Lightbourne;26019949] Also you denied it last time, I didn't believe you then, but this time you definitely used pitch correction and it still sounds dull and uninspiring.[/QUOTE] Um what? I've never denied anything, and I'm not denying it now. There is a bit of pitch correction in this particular song. Not Auto-tune... but pitch correction. It's not even on that high of a setting whatsoever. It's just enough to keep the ends of phrases from dropping out. I rarely use this, but in this case I did. I know you feel awesome for figuring this out, but it's not that hard to spot. Almost all music nowadays coming out of a studio has some sort of pitch correction on it. You can hear it in almost EVERYTHING. Literally. But it's not that people can't sing, it's like I said, keeping phrases from dropping out. Not everyone does this, but it is definitely overused. Auto-tune is shit sounding; like a robot, or Cher, or pretty much any rap song now hah.
[QUOTE=xSlay3Rx;26026485]No one reads the Arts and Creativity Sub section haha. [editline]13th November 2010[/editline] Here lets start over. Hi there. My name is Bobby, whats yours? [editline]13th November 2010[/editline] Um what? I've never denied anything, and I'm not denying it now. There is a bit of pitch correction in this particular song. Not Auto-tune... but pitch correction. It's not even on that high of a setting whatsoever. It's just enough to keep the ends of phrases from dropping out. I rarely use this, but in this case I did. I know you feel awesome for figuring this out, but it's not that hard to spot. Almost all music nowadays coming out of a studio has some sort of pitch correction on it. You can hear it in almost EVERYTHING. Literally. But it's not that people can't sing, it's like I said, keeping phrases from dropping out. Not everyone does this, but it is definitely overused. Auto-tune is shit sounding; like a robot, or Cher, or pretty much any rap song now hah.[/QUOTE] I pulled it up last time, you denied it, there's no questioning that. Whatever, I don't understand how people can commendate you for this, I definitely couldn't listen to it and enjoy it.
Please stop Bobby, the first couple of songs were great. But that was just truly not very good or interesting. Try singing about a different game.
Try singing about something that isn't a game. Also I rated disagree above because the first couple of songs were also shit.
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