• Scout and his dad: A short story
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[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7CdbGpH5_g[/media]
Scout and his dad: A Not-So-Excellently-Posed Slideshow. But really it was kind of meh.
sucked
*cries*
:arghfist::saddowns:
Meh story, mostly terrible posing, and the music at the end got really unfitting. 2/10. [editline]09:29PM[/editline] Oh fuck, THIS is what i spent my 1111th post on?
Told you Xenoyia...
Eeehhh. It was a decent idea that was executed less than perfectly. Windows Movie Maker Editing. We've all seen it, we've all done it at some point. I recommend you upgrade to Sony Vegas or Adobe Premiere or something along those lines. The music was kind of unfitting. It almost seemed more like a silent film comedy track. If you Google you could probably find some much more fitting royalty free tracks from places like Machinimasound.com or Incompetech.com or somewhere. It would have been a little better with maybe a narrator voice. If you go to VirtualFlicks.net or somewhere you can find some very nice and free working voice actors. The poses were alright, I guess. I've seen better and worse. At least you didn't use gm_contstruct. Speaking of maps, I would have thought it to be a little better if you changed maps to a graveyard for the scene where Scout is at the tombstone and if you changed the map to a small bedroom for when he hangs himself. It wasn't too bad, but you've definitely got some room to improve. Hopefully this "review" can help you further improve.
that was bad
Shouldn't scouts dad be the spy?
[QUOTE=MrAfroShark70;24630749]Shouldn't scouts dad be the spy?[/QUOTE] Yiff, yiff, yiff.
[QUOTE=Cobra Dude;24630834]Yiff, yiff, yiff.[/QUOTE] :what:
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