• Letters from gm_construct- A War of the Severs Spinoff
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Several people across Facepunch expressed their desire to see War of the Servers from the perspective of the mingebags- a 'Letters from gm_construct.' Here is my take on the idea, I hope you like it. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MIwIf_g8CC4[/media] Also I'm posting in here too because no one ever replies in the Videos section
To be honest it was boring
The fact that it is a trailer just screams unfinished idea. I mean if you really want to deliver what you think people want at least make something that explores the concept more. This is just... [QUOTE=tehMuffinMan;29750081]To be honest it was boring[/QUOTE] That. Unsatisfying.
It was semi-crap, But i found it hilarious when the tribe shit started to play -kind of as if mingebags were somekind of spiritual aborginal creatures. Frigging avatar lol. But yeah, If you write the events on a paper, You'll notice that there's only few lines of actual stuff happening and most of it is occuring in stereotypical but also very unrelated manner. Ya i got the idea of mingebag kind of like becoming a regular player but the final version of the video is very simplified. There could be more you could show, Expecially at the first 2 minutes. Also It kind of hurt my eyes to watch the ragdoll mingebag wiggle from side to side like a huge rubber dildo.
[QUOTE=papu2;29750816]It was semi-crap, But i found it hilarious when the tribe shit started to play -kind of as if mingebags were somekind of spiritual aborginal creatures. Frigging avatar lol. But yeah, If you write the events on a paper, You'll notice that there's only few lines of actual stuff happening and most of it is occuring in stereotypical but also very unrelated manner. Ya i got the idea of mingebag kind of like becoming a regular player but the final version of the video is very simplified. There could be more you could show, Expecially at the first 2 minutes. Also It kind of hurt my eyes to watch the ragdoll mingebag wiggle from side to side like a huge rubber dildo.[/QUOTE] All pretty much constructive criticism here. Take these things to heart and improve. There is potential here.
[QUOTE=papu2;29750816]It was semi-crap, But i found it hilarious when the tribe shit started to play -kind of as if mingebags were somekind of spiritual aborginal creatures. Frigging avatar lol. But yeah, If you write the events on a paper, You'll notice that there's only few lines of actual stuff happening and most of it is occuring in stereotypical but also very unrelated manner. Ya i got the idea of mingebag kind of like becoming a regular player but the final version of the video is very simplified. There could be more you could show, Expecially at the first 2 minutes. Also It kind of hurt my eyes to watch the ragdoll mingebag wiggle from side to side like a huge rubber dildo.[/QUOTE] Really pretty much what I thought, although it's a good idea.
THIS is something I would definitely watch. This is a good idea for a movie!
The music is does not fits And the video was pretty "normal" Idea is good, execution is poor
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