So it's been roughly two weeks since I've posted my last video The Little Things and here is my third post here on Facepunch. It's my first attempt at an action short. It's [I]very[/I] short but it's real nice. Let me know what you guys think!
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PS: I know the one scene where I get shot is just so eh, but this is a no budget short. So bear with it.
[video=youtube;k1Sm64MOAAI]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1Sm64MOAAI&feature=g-upl[/video]
you should involve more 3D geometry in chase scenes, just running in a straight line gets boring after 1 scene; also try using corners to provide suspense. like, here's a good idea, the guy turns a corner, and the camera shows that the badguys run in the wrong direction (using DoF here would be a good idea, like, having the foreground be the guy hiding, and the background the guys running, have that focused) and then have a shot of the guy slowing walking down the alley, tired. but right when all seems to be okay, blur out the foreground and focus on the badguys in the background, who backtracked and are now chasing the guy down the alley. That could lead into a fence jump, and you get it
good otherwise
Thanks a lot for the feedback Meatpuppet. We would have shot more scenes (exactly like that actually) but we were running very low on day light. Sadly, but next action short I make it will be less still shots. Once again thanks!
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