The intro was longer than the video itself...that's never good.
[QUOTE=juilia;29787943]The intro was longer than the video itself...that's never good.[/QUOTE]
I know... It is my first time in awhile. Have any ideas?
[QUOTE=poopernooper;29788032]what was the point of this video[/QUOTE]
I figured some people can give me some ideas. :frog:
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29788061]I figured some people can give me some ideas. :frog:[/QUOTE]
ok, make the intro longer and flashier it'll make the video better i promise
Horrible. Why did his whole head explode? Why did you feel the need to take up half my screen with such filth?
First, the intro was too long.
Second, if your hand was a gun it'd probably be a 9mm, meaning your head would be nowhere near exploding, there would simply be a small entry and exit wound along with the gore emitting from the exit wound.
Third, your camera is shitty and not good for these videos.
Fourth, that's the fucking shittiest pistol sound you could get. Inside a closed area like that I doubt you'd even be able to make anything else out on the camera but a deafening explosion of sound.
I can't go on!
[QUOTE=Nifae;29788298] ( Insert hate here ) [/quote]
Thanks for being so picky
You ask for ideas, but say people are "picky" when they actually offer some? lol
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29789086]Thanks for being so picky[/QUOTE]
Are you daft? That's perfectly reasonable criticism. Your video. It sucked. [b]SUCKED.[/b] And instead of flaming you he gave you helpful (albeit a little heavy on the tough love) ideas to improve your worthless video. Your effects are not good. Your masking is bad, the effects are laughable, honestly you have little potential as far as I can tell. And yet, other than some foul language, all he said to you was how to improve your terrible "movie". And he's being picky? Fuck no he isn't! You're on the goddamned internet, you need to fix this crap if you don't want to drown in boxes. Those are all excellent points I would have said myself if I hadn't just now realized that you aren't willing to take a little advice. (so instead I did this).
Please fix...everything.
-intro = bad
-effects = bad
-color correction on effects = bad
-sound effects = bad
-acting = ...wtf
-quality = did you just take a 480p video and blow it up to 720? Get a better camera, encoder, editing software, you need it to have actual 720p quality.
-lol
hes just a little kid.......
[QUOTE=bedcat;29789473]hes just a little kid.......[/QUOTE]
Sorry, it's the internet, we flame 12 year olds who post COD montages too, and it's not like I'm just telling him to go off himself. I think it's a learning experience.
What bedcat said.
Though this one appears to have more intelligence than a sack of rocks, very unique.
"Subscribe to me"
Nope
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;29789590]Sorry, it's the internet, we flame 12 year olds who post COD montages too, and it's not like I'm just telling him to go off himself. I think it's a learning experience.[/QUOTE]
he's apparently 20
Oh god the cornyness
Does getting shot in the jaw make ones head explode, let alone die?
I wouldn't notice that this is fake if the title wasn't there on video
I kept clicking ahead to skip the intro and I missed the video, had to watch it a second time :suicide:....
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;29789590]Sorry, it's the internet, we flame 12 year olds who post COD montages too, and it's not like I'm just telling him to go off himself. I think it's a learning experience.[/QUOTE]
Too bad I am 15.
people are being trolled by a "15" year old
hahahahaha
[QUOTE=Zags;29789178]You ask for ideas, but say people are "picky" when they actually offer some? lol[/QUOTE]
It was more of a sarcastic reply. I am glad that I am getting feedback. I am getting this 1080p camera for $300 and I'll try to do better. I said it's my first time
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29805172]It was more of a sarcastic reply. I am glad that I am getting feedback. I am getting this 1080p camera for $300 and I'll try to do better. I said it's my first time[/QUOTE]
Please don't.
[url]http://www.amazon.com/Kodak-Pocket-Video-Camera-Black/dp/B002HOPUPC/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1305334491&sr=8-1[/url]
$110, +$30 for a 16 GB class 10 SD card. CNET's choice for best camcorder of 2010. Shoots 1080, 720@60 or 30 fps, has image stabilization, external mic support, batteries are $6, and a wide angle lens kit for $20. I own it for recording things on the quick, and it's a beautiful camera that works great, especially if you're a beginner. Once you get serious about making this stuff, then spend a few hundred on a potentially better camera.
At the very least post what you want to get so I/we can have a chance berate it.
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29788061]I figured some people can give me some ideas. :frog:[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29789086]Thanks for being so picky[/QUOTE]
"Will accept any CC!"
"Shut up trolls!"
LOL
try again
Actually go through with it for making this.
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29789086]Thanks for being so picky[/QUOTE]
Shut the fuck up, he was giving you great advice and you just throw it off as picky? Your video sucked big donkey cock because of them reasons, and if you follow them you could at least make it suck less cock and make it suck a monkeys cock. And eventually it would turn into no cock but licking vagina.
What the fuck did I just type?
[editline]14th May 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29805172]It was more of a sarcastic reply. I am glad that I am getting feedback. I am getting this 1080p camera for $300 and I'll try to do better. I said it's my first time[/QUOTE]
lies
[editline]14th May 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=SmashBrosFan11;29795204]Too bad I am 15.[/QUOTE]
lol.
Make a real version next time.
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