Is this guy trying to be an unfunny Kilian Experience?
[QUOTE=$$>MUFFIN<$$;50463258]That was a very un-informative video.[/QUOTE]
That was kinda what I was going for, but at the same time I was trying to make it kinda stupid/funny.
Thank you everyone for taking your time to watch it, judging from the feedback, it seems like it wasn't a great hit.
[B]I would be really helpful if you could point me out on what I could do better.[/B] I guess that humor wasn't the best, but what about it could I do better etc.?
And for the comments about the likeness to Kilian Experience, I draw a lot of inspiration from his videos. I liked the format of his videos and tried to mimic them a bit.
The jokes were mostly uninspired and predictable(mtn dew noscope kids, tips are for noobs, puns about Mei, Trump's wall. All of those have been done to death).
You didn't have almost any buildup to your punchlines and sort of just skip straight to the punchline.
I don't have much to say other than that you should work on your pacing and jokes more. Maybe even derive away from Killian's style and make something that is more unique to you.
[QUOTE=Fancy Godgineer;50464278]The jokes were mostly uninspired and predictable(mtn dew noscope kids, tips are for noobs, puns about Mei, Trump's wall. All of those have been done to death).
You didn't have almost any buildup to your punchlines and sort of just skip straight to the punchline.
I don't have much to say other than that you should work on your pacing and jokes more. Maybe even derive away from Killian's style and make something that is more unique to you.[/QUOTE]
Thank you very much. I'll try improving and hopefully over time I will be able to provide something that will be good!
I enjoyed it, to be honest. I like watching most stuff about Overwatch that people have put effort into.
Gz man :)
The jokes were really lame and meta. Don't do the "makes joke, follows with telling audience how dumb it was" routine. It's cheap and not funny. And drop the puns. They are rarely funny. Same is for self deprecation. It is rarely funny when done like this. "I pick Mei cause I'm fat" yeah okay, sucks to be you? Where's the funny bit? The comedy is a total miss in this video.
I get the feeling that you read some random jokes and puns on the internet and then just rehearsed them in the video. Nothing feels original, there's no soul. Look at Killian, besides his stuff just being funny, the content is unique and has a spirit of its own. Here it's more like 4chan collective.
[QUOTE=Sokrates;50464369]Thank you very much. I'll try improving and hopefully over time I will be able to provide something that will be good![/QUOTE]
The best advice I can give is try to be original. If you used stuff that's been done to death a million times and not even try to put any originality in it, people will hate you for it.
And trust me, comedy is no laughing matter. No pun intended.
I was expecting a DSP video.
I am somewhat disappointed it wasnt a DSP video.
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