Hi and hello, fellow GarrysMod players and youtube video inventers! I have a request for you all fine people to watch my video for view count sake! It is relatively created out of my spare time, which i do have alot of, and i am getting close to finishing the second video! I thought of joining FacePunch forums after it helping me on Gmod issues, and decided "Oh this is the perfect place to get people's attention to watch my new series". If you like, you can subscribe to my channel [url]http://www.youtube.com/user/GeneralAring?feature=mhee[/url], but thats on you, and or like and comment on my video. Thanks!! :)
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PhF6DIE3na8[/url]
Horrible.
well I didn't enjoy that
the video went full retard as soon as it began. Please stop making them.
Keep it up, was funny.
You should get more practice first, like a year or so.
[QUOTE=clc666;31685522]Keep it up, was funny.[/QUOTE]
I can't even imagine what your standards are.
Absolutely dreadful.
Although this video really needs some work, I'm impressed by your effort. As for improvement:
- Don't use GM_Construct. Instead, find a map more fitting for your characters/scenario.
- Try not to overlap music.
- Be a bit more original with the jokes (rather than using memes like "pills here").
This video makes me sad.
....
Where do I START?
Where do I FINISH?
What do I even need to SAY about this?
The entire video was one overlong, unfunny scene that at NO point tried to make even the most modest amount of sense. What the FUCK was supposed to be happening, at ANY given point? Why was the heavy and medic there? Why did Louis go all hulk out of nowhere? Why is it that the only thing that was even REMOTELY funny was the medic throwing a fire extinguisher on (Francis?) to douse his flaming body.
If this is funny to you, then you need professional help. Otherwise, random does not necessarily equal funny. For random things to be funny, there must be HUMOR to their randomness.
[QUOTE=Talishmar;31686160]I can't even imagine what your standards are.[/QUOTE]
Not that low, this is just one of those things, who expects a Gmod video to be something amazing.
I came in, read what he said, knew that it was just a Gmod video he had done in his spare time, and not meant to be anything more. And then it was funny.
Okay well the audio was way to fucking cluttered. The characters in the video never shut up for one second. You will notice that other gmod video creators at least let their characters react and do actions instead of bombarding us with sound clips from the game. I didn't watch the whole video, but it went almost nowhere from what I watched. People want to see the characters doing something. Not sitting around watching television.
If you put this here for criticism there is my two cents.
I picture a little kid staring sadly at the vast amount of negative feedback he receives after posting his video. I almost felt sorry for that kid.
Then I watched his video.
Yeeah...
Get off the internet.
Boom roasted
Well, people who criticize are assholes, besides that, it was my first video. I should of done more work on it, because i rushed it, go figure. Besides that, the second is better, but takes off after the nuke at the end, and as people say you can get better with more practice... So give me encouragement and not jackarse-ness. Thank you.
[QUOTE=GeneralAring;31697934]Well, people who criticize are assholes, besides that, it was my first video. I should of done more work on it, because i rushed it, go figure. Besides that, the second is better, but takes off after the nuke at the end, and as people say you can get better with more practice... So give me encouragement and not jackarse-ness. Thank you.[/QUOTE]
Admitted that you rushed it, and said that we should give you a break because it was your first one. Your first time is not an excuse for something like this.
Yes i admitted, that i rushed it, but that's after the fact of looking it over a thousand times in comparison to my second video. Your putting words in my mouth, i never said anything about anyone giving me a break about it being my first video, just because it being my first time of posting something like it, i only wanted people to know that "Hey my first time of doing this". MY first time is an excuse?, hardly,i expected constructive criticism, but people should keep it to themselves, unless they want to PM, or give advice. Thank you.
[QUOTE=GeneralAring;31699382]Yes i admitted, that i rushed it, but that's after the fact of looking it over a thousand times in comparison to my second video. Your putting words in my mouth, i never said anything about anyone giving me a break about it being my first video, just because it being my first time of posting something like it, i only wanted people to know that "Hey my first time of doing this". MY first time is an excuse?, hardly,i expected constructive criticism, but people should keep it to themselves, unless they want to PM, or give advice. Thank you.[/QUOTE]
You won't get constructive criticism if you make something like this that probably took you less than an hour to make.
you watched your own video 1000 times wtf?
OP is 12.
It's a so-so parody of the "lol random" Gmod productions that seem to mostly originate from a select few well known YouTube individuals, but your video is a tad overproduced and [i]way[/i] too long. I was amused by the cacophony of music and the inspirational credit given to DasBoSchitt, kitty0706, and RubberFruit, but the humor doesn't stand on its own, making it fall short as a parody.
I'd give you more support, but there's Half-Life: Source footage during the credits, and parody or not, only gormless scrubs play Half-Life: Source.
Another "video maker" who can't take criticism.
Well there goes any chance of these improving.
I won't get constructive criticism because you think i created this in an hour? This took me at most 2 weeks or so, i cannot elaborate on the actual time. Why make jokes? Vedi, ok now that is plain idoitcy, literally thinking i watched this video a thousand times, come on, I was saying that i kept trying to analyze on how or which way or difference, i could put into the video while i was making it. To black- i only made this from tons of ideas that i had thought of from watching tons of different Gmod videos on youtube, all with different skits and of or random scene, that "seemed" to be a "Rofl", moment, hypothetically. It's only to ong because i rushed it and did not polish it to be better, unlike my second video, im still making. Cacophony music, like i said i rushed and put to many things, i could of chose better music, but had no access. I figured the laughs would be funny at points. I gave credit, only from what the ideas that can be given in a million ways to me and other people. You think im a gormless scrub? I am quite intelligent, none the less. Yet what started everything ValVe made and given to us? Half-life, besides i was bored and figured to put game-video credits, why not? Jesus.. No need to judge what you do not know. Seems to me you are just posing for political points, by being a egoist judge for popularity, by of what you said. Thank you. 2nd video will be better.
[editline]12th August 2011[/editline]
I expected "criticism", trust me, but people could give props, or help, rather then arrogant rudeness!
Put the effort into a video about 1 minute long = profit.
Problems with this:
No good random moments, no story, to long, to long fades, music messed up, no good gmod tricks, generic years long old memes, needs more frames, speech made no sense, 2.30min long outro thing.
[QUOTE=GeneralAring;31702382]I won't get constructive criticism because you think i created this in an hour? This took me at most 2 weeks or so, i cannot elaborate on the actual time. Why make jokes? Vedi, ok now that is plain idoitcy, literally thinking i watched this video a thousand times, come on, I was saying that i kept trying to analyze on how or which way or difference, i could put into the video while i was making it. To black- i only made this from tons of ideas that i had thought of from watching tons of different Gmod videos on youtube, all with different skits and of or random scene, that "seemed" to be a "Rofl", moment, hypothetically. It's only to ong because i rushed it and did not polish it to be better, unlike my second video, im still making. Cacophony music, like i said i rushed and put to many things, i could of chose better music, but had no access. I figured the laughs would be funny at points. I gave credit, only from what the ideas that can be given in a million ways to me and other people. You think im a gormless scrub? I am quite intelligent, none the less. Yet what started everything ValVe made and given to us? Half-life, besides i was bored and figured to put game-video credits, why not? Jesus.. [b]No need to judge what you do not know. Seems to me you are just posing for political points, by being a egoist judge for popularity, by of what you said. Thank you. 2nd video will be better.[/b]
[editline]12th August 2011[/editline]
I expected "criticism", trust me, but people could give props, or help, rather then arrogant rudeness![/QUOTE]
You're joking right?
[img]http://i.imgur.com/EN4vE.png[/img]
Don't ever make videos like this one again.
In what part of that statement do you think i had been joking on or about.
[editline]13th August 2011[/editline]
At least sexy eskimo has some sense to be polite, thanks for the help, appreciate it.. 2nd will be better.
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