The Pixel Show Episode 12 | My Fez Writes Awful, Awful Lyrics (British video game discussion show) - General

[video=youtube;TVNHtwRPozw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVNHtwRPozw[/video] Some things you oughta know: - [B]I can't sing, and I have never been under the impression that I could sing[/B]. The introduction joke is just that: a joke! - [B]The show is completely unscripted.[/B] Everything you see is being thought up on the spot. - I encourage you to send in comments, and to rate/subscribe/read my blog - I do what I do for my fans, and I want to have as many fans as possible!

Some cc: Fix the camera bobbing around, it looks weiiird, and put the camera slightly lower so it's pointed up at a slight angle so it looks better. You need to leave a few seconds after you finish speaking before you turn the camera off, as it looks weird when you use your remote as the transition spins in from the right. Also, speaking of the transitions, the transitions are still a little too long - I think cutting it down to half the original length would be good. One other thing I'd also do if I were you would be to improve the ending - the ending theme runs a little too long with nothing really changing - maybe if you had a single name, with different frames for each one, and maybe added a link to your website and a subscribe button, and then had a little five / ten second clip at the end with an outtake or something extra, just so people are more willing to carry on watching until the end for some "extra" footage or whatever. (What's weird is that I started typing this before you started talking about evaluating the show... Which is strange.) But other than the stuff I put before, it's still pretty entertaining :v:

[QUOTE=evlbzltyr;35361002]Some cc: Fix the camera bobbing around, it looks weiiird, and put the camera slightly lower so it's pointed up at a slight angle so it looks better. You need to leave a few seconds after you finish speaking before you turn the camera off, as it looks weird when you use your remote as the transition spins in from the right. Also, speaking of the transitions, the transitions are still a little too long - I think cutting it down to half the original length would be good.[/QUOTE] Point thoroughly taken. I forgot to bring my tripod home from university, so you're looking at me from atop a stack of DVDs. I'll rectify the problem in the coming episodes! As for the transitions, I'll take that into account - we'll see how half-length improves the format. [QUOTE=evlbzltyr;35361002] One other thing I'd also do if I were you would be to improve the ending - the ending theme runs a little too long with nothing really changing - maybe if you had a single name, with different frames for each one, and maybe added a link to your website and a subscribe button, and then had a little five / ten second clip at the end with an outtake or something extra, just so people are more willing to carry on watching until the end for some "extra" footage or whatever.[/QUOTE] The ending is usually accompanied by a video of me admiring the credits and waving and smiling at the audience. However, this week's episode features a) a change of set, b) much better lighting than the older episodes, which generally have significant shadows on my face, and c) my red/black shirt combo, whereas the end credits have me wearing green and white. Needless to say, I will reshoot the end credits sequence once I am back at uni. Thank you very much for the CC - I hope you enjoyed the episode regardless!

This doesn't apply to your video, but your website's background hurts my eyes.

[QUOTE=toaster468;35361347]This doesn't apply to your video, but your website's background hurts my eyes.[/QUOTE] Really? I will endeavour to change it, then, if that's a problem - what would be a more fitting background?

[QUOTE=KitAlexHarrison;35363637]Really? I will endeavour to change it, then, if that's a problem - what would be a more fitting background?[/QUOTE] If you want to keep the stripes you can make the lighter lines thicker. I suggest a solid gray background, see how that works.

[QUOTE=toaster468;35370236]If you want to keep the stripes you can make the lighter lines thicker. I suggest a solid gray background, see how that works.[/QUOTE] I made the grey likes thicker, how does that look now? :) Don't forget to spread the word of the show if you liked it - more likes/comments/subscribers is always good!

Nice as always.

[QUOTE=Juggernog;35388105]Nice as always.[/QUOTE] Cheers mate, glad to hear you enjoyed it! Always happy to hear the show's made a positive impact!