Elves - The Thief (Animation)

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Omg I made flash animation ending is best stay for it come on

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bdHngOmMbjY[/media]

Say what you think be nice now please :butt:

[Awesomecaek]

Heh, that was somewhat decent. You didn't have to fuck up the ending with random explosion tho.

[pvt.meh]

The animation was pretty good, the voice acting could always be improved but from what I can tell it can't be expected. And yeah, the ending could have been a lot better.

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[QUOTE=Awesomecaek;21116924]Heh, that was somewhat decent. You didn't have to fuck up the ending with random explosion tho.[/QUOTE]

Oh, yeah, the ending is a reference to another short animation I made.

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8tM-lSZbFw[/media]

[mrmr]

lol thats pritty good, the voices are pritty good too. Wher'd you get the clips?

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[QUOTE=Rombishead;21117169]lol thats pritty good, the voices are pritty good too. Wher'd you get the clips?[/QUOTE]

What clips? Sound effects? Voice clips? Music? I recorded all of the sound in my room.

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[QUOTE=pvt.meh;21116941]the voice acting could always be improved but from what I can tell it can't be expected.[/QUOTE]

What do you mean by that? :crossarms:

[mrmr]

Yeah I meant the voice acting was it you or someone else?

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[QUOTE=Rombishead;21117699]Yeah I meant the voice acting was it you or someone else?[/QUOTE]

I played the voice of Junior and the robotic voice, my older brother played Kevin and the thief.

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Bömp

[hovergroovie]

Good first try. Newgrounds will get you a lot more feedback if you haven't already gone there.

[h4ngman]

Sorry, but until you get your voice to crack you might consider hiring another voice actor. It is kinda distracting

[BAZ]

[QUOTE=H4ngman;21174270]Sorry, but until you get your voice to crack you might consider hiring another voice actor. It is kinda distracting[/QUOTE]

Yeah right after he gets picked up by a major studio and he can afford it.

[Ralle]

I enjoyed it.
Good job.

[Boatplugs]

[QUOTE=H4ngman;21174270]Sorry, but until you get your voice to crack you might consider hiring another voice actor. It is kinda distracting[/QUOTE]

Not really, I would expect elves to have a kids voice, I think it was kind of fitting. Oh, and the Yo-yo part made me laugh.

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Thanks, It actually is on Newgrounds.

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/531541[/url]

Vote five if you like it!

[AimlessGiant]

Random explosion ruined the ending, some good ideas especially to yo yo bit that made me laugh little. Maybe put a little more effort into the voice acting. I give you 3.5/5

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Alright, thanks, my brother is really hard to work with. It's hard to make him stay serious!