To be brutally honest with you, your maps aren't particularly good
I rated you dumb, but i feel bad for you since you have used your valuable time in making these maps.
They are ok, a little too dark maybe?
Im no mapper but i know a thing or two about presentation and editing:
Learn how to smooth your camera with either an addon or in console.
And don't just plaster in "badass" music that you like. Because it makes the video cheesy and unbearable to watch.
You could make more detailed maps if you moved over to CS:GO.
Also, that SCP map could make an interesting MG mode if one player could be the monster.
Your biggest problem is that you've only made undetailed box rooms. They look like they'd belong in the GoldSource engine
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[QUOTE=mak364;46438486]Lol people actually still play cs:s?[/QUOTE]
People still play 1.6, what's your point?
[QUOTE=Rixxz2;46439397]Your biggest problem is that you've only made undetailed box rooms. They look like they'd belong in the GoldSource engine
[editline]8th November 2014[/editline]
People still play 1.6, what's your point?[/QUOTE]
1.6 is a whole lot of better.
Now onto the videos:
Your maps are way to dark and blocky and detailless. Also; adding Breaking Me Down, the Jaws theme or generic dubstep won't make the map scary either.
[QUOTE=Zovox;46439459]1.6 is a whole lot of better.[/QUOTE]
I just don't understand people who say this. How is 1.6 better? Because you're a 90's kid or because of 32x32 textures? Not to mention the buggy hitboxes and gameplay in general.
[QUOTE=Twistai;46440487]I just don't understand people who say this. How is 1.6 better? Because you're a 90's kid or because of 32x32 textures? Not to mention the buggy hitboxes and gameplay in general.[/QUOTE]
have you played the game or have you just happened to come across a picture of some generic de_dust server and decided you were going to base all your opinions on that one piece of evidence
[editline]8th November 2014[/editline]
pro-tip: play the fucking game
They arent good maps at all, but it looks like you are just starting out. Go to the mapping section on the forum, take criticism, and keep telling yourself you are really shit at map making because you are and then continue to improve. I dont mean this in an asshole way, but truthfully they arent good, doesnt mean you cant ever make them good. Everyone starts somewhere, so if you want to get better go to the mapping section and listen to people, dont lash out when people say your stuff isnt very good, instead use that to better yourself and you will become better. Just look at some of the screenshots in the map pimpage thread and honestly ask yourself if you could do that, and then when the answers no, start working towards getting better.
Also if you are making horror maps and making a video to showcase them you dont want to use music like you did, you need something more fitting, you want the music/ambience in a trailer/showcase video to match the feeling the map is trying to portray.
Just look at how much more fitting this is and I just picked the first SH2 song that was horror sounding on youtube, mute the video on the left.
[URL]http://www.youtubedoubler.com/?video1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DeduVlec_whY&start1=0&video2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DPuNOnFa-q3Y&start2=0&authorName=asdsa[/URL]
Dont give up though, you obviously enjoy mapping and woudlnt go through the trouble of making showcase videos and trailers without having a good time so keep going and just keep trying to improve yourself.
what's the music in the SCP video? it's p. chill
Would be cool if it wasn't dark. Maybe then there'd be something worth seeing.
[QUOTE=Twistai;46440487]I just don't understand people who say this. How is 1.6 better? Because you're a 90's kid or because of 32x32 textures? Not to mention the buggy hitboxes and gameplay in general.[/QUOTE]
excuse me
have you ever played the game
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