• GTA V Introduction
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Fanmade by me, its from the idea of the GTA San Andreas Introduction [video=youtube;JnQqhAKWJxU]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JnQqhAKWJxU&feature=youtu.be[/video]
Put 'fanmade in the title next time, for fucks sake
Pretty cool but despite telling myself it would be something else my heart still skipped a beat when I saw the title, that was a really dick move.
Music doesnt fit at all
You seem to be missing the most important aspect of a GTA. A little something called style. it's so dreadfully dry man, what's up with the cheesy sample music! There's literally no pacing, no artistic touch just a boring mess. Sorry.
Sweet crispy jesus that intro was long
that was shit. your intro was shit, the music was shit, the framing was shit and the text was shit try again
[QUOTE=zerotwelve;40561320]that was shit. your intro was shit, the music was shit, the framing was shit and the text was shit try again[/QUOTE] Ok I'll admit it's not very well made but there's no need to be such an asshole man
[QUOTE=Dead Madman;40561623]Ok I'll admit it's not very well made but there's no need to be such an asshole man[/QUOTE] this comment is shit
[video]http://youtube.com/watch?v=D-wLIAISF9I#[/video] This is the original one from gta san andreas
You had a good direction going. Keep at and and improve upon what you currently have.
[QUOTE=Vortexz0r;40560896]Fanmade by me, its from the idea of the GTA San Andreas Introduction [video=youtube;JnQqhAKWJxU]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JnQqhAKWJxU&feature=youtu.be[/video][/QUOTE] Alright, try and make the part where the name comes up a little quicker, make the text a little more jazzy, and change the background so that the corners of the videos dont fade to black.
Not bad but did you really have to leave fanmade or something from the thread title? Or was it some sort of a trick to get more people to watch it?
I actually found that to be terrible. sorry
Could your intro be any longer?
That music was so terribly out of placed I am still wondering how you decided to put it in. It couldn't have been more out of place. Fix the text making black rectangles, the sample cheesy music, and the pacing and it'll be a lot better
This could be decent I think, but you need to change a few things first.
Add a bit of color and you got 90's sitcom.
I hope that was intentionally bad, I couldn't stop myself from laughing, sorry. the music oh my god.
Alright guys thanks for all those positive feedback :D
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