• 2D Intro (with homemade SFX) - Opinions please?
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Hello guys, I have a new upload. I created the SFX myself and I was wondering what you all thought? I'm very happy with the final outcome so please leave a comment and like to support me, thanks! [video=youtube;PXRADvvrSzM]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXRADvvrSzM[/video] [B]What do you think?[/B]
Yeah. It looks good and professional.
Only bad thing about this was the line that was crooked as fuck. Make it smooth.
Thanks ever so much![QUOTE=Darth Ninja;40800532]Yeah. It looks good and professional.[/QUOTE] [editline]27th May 2013[/editline] Thank you for your feedback.[QUOTE=Crazy;40800545]Only bad thing about this was the line that was crooked as fuck. Make it smooth.[/QUOTE]
Looks like something i'd see on TV so it's pretty good
Wow! Thanks! :D [QUOTE=AugustBurnsRed;40800568]Looks like something i'd see on TV so it's pretty good[/QUOTE]
That looks pretty damn good, great job!
Looks pretty nice! My only pet-peeve would be to shorten it a bit, if you were to use it before any films. 9 seconds is sort of the golden rule for the max amount of time for an intro, so it's fine and all. just worth noting.
That totally doesn't look like a sperm going into and egg at all. Other than that I liked it, really fluid motion.
If I worked on a news station I would liked to have something like this
Thank you for your awesome comment! :)[QUOTE=Jocke;40802789]If I worked on a news station I would liked to have something like this[/QUOTE]
I think the screen fades out too quickly in the end, and make that line curvy, it is really good.
After Effects? I recognized the checkered transition thing. Nice work, I do this sort of stuff for TV for work and I can say that yours is clean and pleasing to look at. I recommend not fading to black at the end so quickly, let the logo sink in
There is something off about the first "scene". Probably because It is flat compared the the shaded and (nicely designed) "S". Other than that it's really nice and genuine.
The typing sfx are too loud/sharp imo
Thanks very much for your advice.[QUOTE=Glitchman;40826350]After Effects? I recognized the checkered transition thing. Nice work, I do this sort of stuff for TV for work and I can say that yours is clean and pleasing to look at. I recommend not fading to black at the end so quickly, let the logo sink in[/QUOTE] [editline]29th May 2013[/editline] Thank you.[QUOTE=whatthe;40826467]There is something off about the first "scene". Probably because It is flat compared the the shaded and (nicely designed) "S". Other than that it's really nice and genuine.[/QUOTE]
Maybe add a slight reverb to the ticking so it kind of blends in better. I love flat designs and the circle animations are lovely to me. Colors are bright and interesting looking. Sounds are high quality and feel like they fit. Makes me think I'm going to watch a fashion magazine video or something. My criticisms are that your logo and name are on for a relatively short time. I would shift the focus to the end of it rather than the beginning. Just try to speed up the beginning maybe by half a second, lower the sound effect levels relative to the final typing and let the logo stay on screen longer. On a personal taste thing maybe have the final logo move, as if the text were closer to the camera for some very slight parallax.
Thanks very much for your feedback, I highly appreciate it.[QUOTE=Brt5470;40828856]Maybe add a slight reverb to the ticking so it kind of blends in better. I love flat designs and the circle animations are lovely to me. Colors are bright and interesting looking. Sounds are high quality and feel like they fit. Makes me think I'm going to watch a fashion magazine video or something. My criticisms are that your logo and name are on for a relatively short time. I would shift the focus to the end of it rather than the beginning. Just try to speed up the beginning maybe by half a second, lower the sound effect levels relative to the final typing and let the logo stay on screen longer. On a personal taste thing maybe have the final logo move, as if the text were closer to the camera for some very slight parallax.[/QUOTE]
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