A friend of mine bought me this on the promise that I'd do a video on it.
[video=youtube;O-c60Sgn-wU]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O-c60Sgn-wU[/video]
Let me preface this with I know it's terrible so by all means rip into me on this one and don't hold back. I want to do more vids and put more effort into them so feedback would be appreciated.
I think your edits are good but you do them with more frequency than should be used for a Let's Play, and too little for a more comedic video. I think your style would benefit more from being less of a Let's Play and making more cuts to things you think are funny / important for the audience to know in the game.
Like for example, I think the bits in the beginning where you cut to "FUCCK" but then show yourself slowly typing in "Bird McGe" instead of just cutting to it are at odds with each other. Then after you have the "on one hand, on the other hand" bit, I think you could cut pretty quickly after the "slightly more concerning" text appears directly to the game starting, and so forth.
The only reason I say this is because it seems like you're taking a dunkey / jontron / broteam approach in your video.
Decided to finish up Part 2 this morning
[video=youtube;QOcaiwm-gLE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QOcaiwm-gLE[/video]
It's been a while but in case anyone wanted to see how this shit show ends
[video=youtube;SABzhWwKTUI]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SABzhWwKTUI[/video]
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