[video=youtube;FtIXRauUsJk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FtIXRauUsJk[/video]
Been trying to make new kinds of videos for a while, and inspiration struck for this beauty!
If you'd like to give any feedback, please feel free to let me know what you think!
Hopefully I don't step on any toes, or offend anyone by this video!
This is just something silly that I made that I feel you guys might enjoy!
Thanks! c:
Remove the s!
[QUOTE=Chrisordie;46922341]Remove the s![/QUOTE]
Thank you so much, hahah! I was so confused as to why it wouldn't post.
I'll make sure to look out for that in the future! c:
That's not really an over the top review. I was expecting something closer to Cr1t1kal or AVGN for "over the top"
[QUOTE=JohnFisher89;46923551]That's not really an over the top review. I was expecting something closer to Cr1t1kal or AVGN for "over the top"[/QUOTE]
Oh, I didn't mean to mislead you or anything, hahah!
Is their anyway that I could reword the thread to make it seem more fitting?
It's not bad but I wasn't feeling the "hype". The visuals had high energy and were nicely edited, but there was somewhat of a lack of energy in your voice, so there was a bit of a mismatch between the two.
The review itself is pretty good, the jokes work and you do seem to have grasp of the general structure of a video like this.
The main problem really was the voiced segments. If you want to have a hyped, over-the-top voice, then you really need to go off the deep end a bit. You might be better off not doing that though. Just my two cents.
Pretty sure this is the same video that got removed/user banned just over 2 hours ago.
Why even bother doing it a second time if you already know the result
I think the video would be better if you tried to review it calmly. Like Necrotic Fever said, your voice and the visuals didn't match too well, so I would think a more natural approach would benefit the video greatly.
[QUOTE=Necrotic Fever;46923962]It's not bad but I wasn't feeling the "hype". The visuals had high energy and were nicely edited, but there was somewhat of a lack of energy in your voice, so there was a bit of a mismatch between the two.
The review itself is pretty good, the jokes work and you do seem to have grasp of the general structure of a video like this.
The main problem really was the voiced segments. If you want to have a hyped, over-the-top voice, then you really need to go off the deep end a bit. You might be better off not doing that though. Just my two cents.[/QUOTE]
Well, I appreciate the feedback, really!
I understand that there may be a few hiccups in the "acting" when it comes to voice, and it's definitely something I'll give more work in the future. But I agree with "not going off the deep end!"
Thanks so much! c:
every person who plays this game competitively has wanked over it
makes you think
I think you just need to work on your delivery, you kind of sound like your holding back, im not really sure how to describe it.
[QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;46924674]I think you just need to work on your delivery, you kind of sound like your holding back, im not really sure how to describe it.[/QUOTE]
I agree. I can say that the confidence in my voice work and script need refining. But I really appreciate the help! <3
[QUOTE=Veevz;46923789]Oh, I didn't mean to mislead you or anything, hahah!
Is their anyway that I could reword the thread to make it seem more fitting?[/QUOTE]
Well for one, over the top isn't what the video is. It's more like you just talking about skull girls
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