Hey everybody, just thought I'd share a short film that a few buddies and I are working on centered around a Mojave Express courier and NCR unit. Right now I can only post the teaser but more will come soon.
Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6n6GZLCbk-0[/media]
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Filmed in Ellensburg, WA (Closest we could get to California/Nevada)
Filmed on a Canon T2i with Stock Lens (18-55mm)
Edited in Vegas Pro 10.0
GFX done in After Effects CS5
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That's really cool but do you take some tips?
Personally, the clothing is kinda off. Plad, jeans, and a beanie? wear like.. a trenchcoat or some 50s-60s style pants.
[QUOTE=Region;32331483]That's really cool but do you take some tips?
Personally, the clothing is kinda off. Plad, jeans, and a beanie? wear like.. a trenchcoat or some 50s-60s style pants.[/QUOTE]
A suave gambler hat would fit better if you ask me.
Was the stuff on his face supposed to make it look like he's been in the sun really long? As in a tan?
If so, make sure you cover the neck areas too next time, it looked prety weird with a tanned face and a pale neck.
[QUOTE=Mrfantasticool;32332914]Was the stuff on his face supposed to make it look like he's been in the sun really long? As in a tan?
If so, make sure you cover the neck areas too next time, it looked prety weird with a tanned face and a pale neck.[/QUOTE]
Looked more like military makeup, like camouflage.
Some criticism?
Okay!
Well...it would've been nice to see SOMETHING...throughout the entire teaser...Something to "tease", as it were.
...NOT just some exhausted dude covered in dirt walking along what is CLEARLY not the Mohave, pre OR post-war, holding a suitcase with the NCR logo stickered onto it, for the entire duration of the thing.
Not only am I not the least bit engaged by this, but you don't even seem like you're trying to SELL anything. We can only GUESS about some semblance of story, probably to due with some plot McGuffin in the suitcase, and really...nothing else.
Not only that, but I buy that this is the Fallout Universe even LESS given the first thing we see is a friggin' modern-day boom-box. Need I remind, the Fallout Universe sticks with a sort of technologically amped 50's motif.
Literally, the only way I'd know in ANY capacity that this was Fallout-related, was the NCR sticker and the music...
...it's not enough.
Look, these days, if you can't even do something as standard as extract the Deathclaw model from the games, animate it chasing someone and camera-track/composite it into the scene, you might as well not bother. You don't look like you've got a budget for...well, anything really, save for the camera. Even in a world where indie-filmmaking is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and therefore more accessible, this is unpalatable.
I just found it really weird how someone was trudging around in the Mohave Desert with mutants around, obviously carrying important cargo, [b]without a weapon.[/b]
Not yellow enough 0/10
Kinda sucked massive scrotes.
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