ATI Radeon HD 4770 Promo V2 *IMPROVISED and REDONE* - An After Effects Video
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Took the criticisms from the other thread ([url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=812326[/url]). Redone it, I guarantee this one is MUCH better than the first one.
[hd]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IDcI19GlTbA[/hd]
Comments and if there's something wrong/not right, just tell me.
[b]34[/b] Layers ([b]12[/b] audio).
[b]Motion blur[/b].
[b]25[/b] FPS.
Edit: I just realized that the beginning was slow as hell. My bad.
The gameplay videos were quite choppy, but the video was nice
I'm out of RAM and hard disk speed :(
looks good hopefully you make more
The only good part was the intro. Next time try turning off in-game sounds and keep playing the dramatic horn music. Some of the gameplay videos were pretty boring, too. Like in the GTA IV one, all we see is you getting in a car and a little bit of driving. Try a gunfight with explosions next time, because that's what most people wanna see.
[QUOTE=hikula;17927706]The only good part was the intro. Next time try turning off in-game sounds and keep playing the dramatic horn music. Some of the gameplay videos were pretty boring, too. Like in the GTA IV one, all we see is you getting in a car and a little bit of driving. Try a gunfight with explosions next time, because that's what most people wanna see.[/QUOTE]
He's not Michael Bay jeez, let him do what he likes.
Stuff was on screen for too long, I felt as though I was watching a slideshow. Not bad though.
[QUOTE=Melon_Mapper;17927799]He's not Michael Bay jeez, let him do what he likes.[/QUOTE]
I R MICKEL BAY NAO. loljk
About the in-game sound, I tried muting, it sounds really bland and boring so I unmuted them and lowered the background music when there's gameplay video on the screen.
The start was waaaaay too long, there were too few scenes and they ran for too long
[QUOTE=Melon_Mapper;17927799]He's not Michael Bay jeez, let him do what he likes.[/QUOTE]
It's called constructive criticism
Perhaps tone down the birth rate and increase the death rate on your particles there? And the opening scene should be faster paced.
[QUOTE=xboomguy;17927013]I'm out of RAM and hard disk speed :([/QUOTE]
Uuuhh.
[QUOTE=Profanwolf;17929115]Uuuhh.[/QUOTE]
AA relies heavily on RAM, and rendering speed is determined by the write speed of your HDD.
"Out of hard disk speed" He could have phrased himself a bit better.
It was pretty slow-paced while it should be fast because well you're trying to say the GPU is fast, and the music is fast too.
The clips you showed from the games were usually pretty bland and didn't show alot, i found the RE:5 clip good though. And you should [i]really[/i] be sure that the framerate is 100% steady. The Crysis clip was very laggy etc.
Also in the clips you showed from games, maybe do some cutting to get that extra pacing in it.
The particle effects in the background were a little distracting because they popped up all the time with no fading in or anything.
And as people said and that you realised the intro was long.
Thanks for net telling me how many layers you used this time:smile:
Oh yeah, and maybe find another song to the next one you'll probably make.
[QUOTE=TheDKer;17929214]The clips you showed from the games were usually pretty bland and didn't show alot, i found the RE:5 clip good though. And you should [i]really[/i] be sure that the framerate is 100% steady. The Crysis clip was very laggy etc.[/QUOTE]
I can't do that right now because I'm out of hard disk space to defragment and not enough RAM. Also, my thermal compound is finished so I just use toothpaste and the temp is pretty hot. I can't overclock higher.
[QUOTE=TheDKer;17929214]Also in the clips you showed from games, maybe do some cutting to get that extra pacing in it.[/QUOTE]
I'll make sure I do that next time.
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[QUOTE=Kamern;17929150][b]AA[/b] relies heavily on RAM, and rendering speed is determined by the write speed of your HDD.[/QUOTE]
AA? Anti-aliasing? Or you meant AE (After Effects)?
Great video, speed up the intro and put some action in the GTA gameplay.
Keep up the good work.
[QUOTE=xboomguy;17942102]I can't do that right now because I'm out of hard disk space to defragment and not enough RAM. Also, [B]my thermal compound is finished so I just use toothpaste[/B] and the temp is pretty hot. I can't overclock higher.[/QUOTE]
Errr.
Good job on it. My only tip would be to fix the particles in the background. They "pop" in and then fade out which looks kinda bad. I'd personally go for a more smooth fade in and fade out and possibly make the move a bit slower.
[QUOTE=CommanderPT;17944413]Good job on it. My only tip would be to fix the particles in the background. They "pop" in and then fade out which looks kinda bad. I'd personally go for a more smooth fade in and fade out and possibly make the move a bit slower.[/QUOTE]
Okay
[editline]06:33PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=chunkymonkey;17943107]Errr.[/QUOTE]
I mean my proper thermal compound, just bought CoolerMaster IceFusion, going to apply it in a few mins.
GTA 4 1280x720 with medium textures and it still played like shit on one of the best computers apparently :P
What do you mean by "Improvised"?
Improvised: create and perform (music, drama, or verse) spontaneously or without preparation
I think you mean improved?
[QUOTE=Dbot;17956391]GTA 4 1280x720 with medium textures and it still played like shit on one of the best computers apparently :P[/QUOTE]
Actually, it plays fine without recording. Averages around 35-60 FPS. I'm waiting for my another HD 4770 to arrive. I'm not going for DX 11 so soon, maybe when their prices dropped.
[editline]07:03PM[/editline]
And at 1920x1080, not 1280x720.
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