Just posting this for my friend, trying to start up some sort of series or something:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irJbTSIiU14&feature=plcp[/media]
Sorry if it's not fantastic or anything but it is his first go at this type of thing and a fresh insight could be good.
Op just saying if it's you don't be scared to say because FP knows most people do that.
But it was alright, really boring because the mod's pretty old and boring now
It's not me honestly, my friend just wanted some extra viewers and I supposed facepunch was a better place to get critique than reddit or 4chan.
Why have you added a letterbox around the video pre-render, you've just made even more black, wasted space around the actual content, for some reason you've also decided to record either at a retarded resolution (It's stretched vertically, squashed horizontally) or you've resized it weirdly during the editing process.. Everything else was pretty good, voice quality was good.
The low fps and video quality is just bad.
Dialog is good, you arnt trying hard or saying fuck or screaming like a girl every 5 seconds.
The constant high pitch sound and the air sounds are something you need to work on, along with the video quality.
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