Several moths of hard work... and no money.
[video=youtube;fvjwnKlX3_I]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fvjwnKlX3_I[/video]
Please, share it if you like it. It would be great. Thanks!
Just a heads up self advertising is generally frowned upon here.
Showing your own vids is only normally excepted if you are looking for advice and critique on your video or are a regular who just wants to share and is not looking to boost the videos view count.
[QUOTE=alexojm;45010739]Just a heads up self advertising is generally frowned upon here.
Showing your own vids is only normally excepted if you are looking for advice and critique on your video or are a regular who just wants to share and is not looking to boost the videos view count.[/QUOTE]
I'm pretty sure he didn't join just to advertise his video, since his other two posts before this were from a couple of months ago, and he wasn't sharing his own work in those posts at all.
But anyway, congratulations TTTcreo. I think this is very well done. The entire thing was suspenseful, and it kept me entertained throughout the whole movie. You all did a great job!
Nice work
As a filmmaker myself, going to nitpick a bit here -
1. The tight close-up shots between the two men when they're looking at each-other are nauseating. Every time they look at eachother, you cut to a different angle - it hurts the eyes a bit to do that. I would have got a shot that had both of them in the frame from the center of the vehicle.
2. Bad editing - it takes too long between the time the driver starts up the car to the time he actually arrives at the other car. I would have shortened that sequence in the middle where the "infected" try to claw out the other guy as it takes too long.
3. Without dialogue, it's not instantly clear what their purpose is - are they taking the car to scavenge it, or are they moving it out of the way to continue traveling? you leave the audience confused. However, having no dialogue makes the short film a little more interesting.
Otherwise, the soundtrack was great, foley effects were good and the cinematography wasn't half bad either. A solid 7/10
OK. Thanks.
Let me rephrase it:
It was your editing that made it jarring during the opening scene. It could have been improved by not cutting when someone turns their head, and cutting to the next shot after their head movement is complete.
OK.
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