I am a loser (Music Video)

[jackbliss]

Hi everyone I'm Santhosh CHRiS aka jackbliss. I'm new to these forums and would like to introduce myself by sharing with you my music video 'I am a loser' a song inspired by own life situation from the bottom of my heart. Its Dedicated to everyone who thinks they're a loser when in fact they're just a winner wearing a mask.

[video=youtube;0CLhj0O5aDE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0CLhj0O5aDE[/video]

If you like the video please be sure to check out more at my channel [url]http://youtube.com/jackbliss[/url]

Thanks for watching! :)

[Zombie]

Sorry to put you down, but the song is kinda just cliches about being a loser/being a winner jammed together.

The beat is highly inconsistent, not exactly catching or enticing, and the instruments are off-beat numerous times.

Your vocals could use some improvement as well. It would've helped in this song if you had given more "kick" to your voice when you were singing about being a "winner", but it just seemed to sound quite similar to when you were talking about being a "loser".

The animation is pretty generic as well, and most of the real life sequences were cheesy and awkward.

The message that you're trying to provide is sincere and sweet, but the music video itself doesn't do it enough justice from a musical and lyrical standpoint.

[Caynug]

If your voice would be more confident it would sound so much better.. it sounds like someone trying to sing along something without being sure about the melodies in the song. The guitar also kinda sounds midi, maybe more high end in there?

[editline]10th January 2014[/editline]

"why why why" oh fuck this made me laugh out loud.

[editline]10th January 2014[/editline]

How come you get so many likes and views on this...

[Kirbyfactor]

Sick fedora.

All serious though, you should put more emotion in your voice, it sounded a little dull.
I liked the animation though.

[Gump]

I liked it

[jackbliss]

[QUOTE=Gump;43487547]I liked it[/QUOTE]

Thanks Gump! :)

Also thanks for all the valuable feedback from everyone! Check out my Facebook fan page for more recent works [url]https://www.facebook.com/laughinggames[/url]

[jackbliss]

[QUOTE=onebit;43509796]Continue.[/QUOTE]

Always! Thanks for your motivation ;)

[BrainBoggler]

The effort put into this is definitely awesome to see... the only complaint I really have is the guitar itself... something about it just sounds fake or wrong. I can't put my finger on it.

[Shark Cat]

lmao

[Winters]

It seems to be pretty heavily inspired by the song creep
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XFkzRNyygfk[/media]

I mean that's not a bad thing but it's really obvious and very similar.

[jackbliss]

[QUOTE=Live2becool;43512146]The effort put into this is definitely awesome to see... the only complaint I really have is the guitar itself... something about it just sounds fake or wrong. I can't put my finger on it.[/QUOTE]

Thanks so much. Yes the guitar and all instruments were made using my Yamaha keyboard. I didn't have the money to hire a real guitarist and studio to record in at the time hence it was all recorded in my room and edited with Audacity which is a free software and my headphone mic lol

I hope its an inspiration to all that you don't have to have the greatest voice or expensive equipment but if you have the heart and try your best with what you have the internet will help you reach many people.

Over the years this video has helped me reach many hundreds of thousands of views on YouTube, fans on Facebook, got me chance to perform at shows, Television, interview in newspaper, and even helped me earn a small side income that's helped me invest in making better music hire artists and even released new stuff on iTunes.

Never give up your dream for anything or what anyone says you can't do. It can be singing, or cooking recipes, writing a book, or whatever your true passion in life calls for and you don't have to give up your day job either and enjoy balancing both.

Good luck to all my new friends on Facepunch. I hope to be a valuable contributor here for years to come :)

[LieutenantLeo]

put more effort into animation and less into music you just dont really have it

[Cake_Fingers]

[QUOTE=jackbliss;43513645]Thanks so much. Yes the guitar and all instruments were made using my Yamaha keyboard. I didn't have the money to hire a real guitarist and studio to record in at the time hence it was all recorded in my room and edited with Audacity which is a free software and my headphone mic lol

I hope its an inspiration to all that you don't have to have the greatest voice or expensive equipment but if you have the heart and try your best with what you have the internet will help you reach many people.

Over the years this video has helped me reach many hundreds of thousands of views on YouTube, fans on Facebook, got me chance to perform at shows, Television, interview in newspaper, and even helped me earn a small side income that's helped me invest in making better music hire artists and even released new stuff on iTunes.

Never give up your dream for anything or what anyone says you can't do. It can be singing, or cooking recipes, writing a book, or whatever your true passion in life calls for and you don't have to give up your day job either and enjoy balancing both.

Good luck to all my new friends on Facepunch. I hope to be a valuable contributor here for years to come :)[/QUOTE]

Thats a pretty beast message man. Good on you.

[jackbliss]

[QUOTE=Mr cake fingers;43514613]Thats a pretty beast message man. Good on you.[/QUOTE]

Thanks I really appreciate it! Its my motivation in life to get out of being depressed and feeling sorry for myself and inspire anyone who feels the same with the positive changes I've made in my own life :)

[Funky Mummy]

I like how the cartoon guitar has 8 strings.