Trying to keep it original on Youtube. You guys always give the best and most positive feedback!
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[video=youtube;QorbtjLe3xI]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QorbtjLe3xI[/video]
You guys always give the most positive feedback when I'm trying to get advice on things. You bring warmth to my soul in the cold depths of the internets.
Ill bite; I thought it was funny. Just try to move your eyes more, as it makes it seem like you're not interested in the scene at all. Your gesturing, tone, and volume are all very good at portraying what you're talking about though, so that's great. You're ahead of most people in this regard. I can also tell you took the time to make the scenes flow well. Play around with some more camera angles, make sure the music doesn't drown out your voice too much, and have some fun seeing what else you can try out.
Good job man. I'll subscribe for a bit and see what else comes out in the next few months. This was much better than the half-day hack-jobs others come out with (Check out almost any thread in the Rust subforum for an example).
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