The song is not really my taste. However for my first music video I think this turned out alright.
Looking for feedback on editing.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tc9jauUQ5PM&feature=youtu.be[/media]
[editline]18th January 2016[/editline]
smoke weed everyday faggot
dun wunna work a nien to fiev fo da man no mo
I watched through the whole thing and while it works as a simple rap video, it's not particularly interesting and I'm not really seeing what direction was put into it. It's a basic success, but as a non-director and a non-film guy I was bored with it.
Why the white room, and then why switch from the white room? Being in a white room could be an interesting setting for something, but it isn't justified with any action and abruptly switched from. Why being on top of a building? That also isn't justified with any action and is abruptly switched from. These two settings don't agree and never made real use of outside of just rapping towards the camera.
I have thought of making music videos, and the thing I've been afraid of doing is just idleness while singing and rapping towards the camera. If that's the case, what's the point of watching the video? Why would I watch that over, say, a live video? You've got no rules of reality for your music videos save for cost and artistic abilities, so you don't have to just record him rapping. Make a story. Or maybe visually describe the music. Or maybe go straight up David Lynch on that video. That should be your next step since you have the basics down.
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