I've been making a lot of Gmod images recently and I really liked this one, so why not share it here. I'd really preciate feedback (Edition effects are only the ones that Gmod allows you to use because I don't like to edit images with other pograms too much).
https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/110893/43464991-7b7f-4edc-891c-23e084a90aaf/3.jpg
I really like this, posing is well done. Only little nitpick is the shadows are really light for how sunny the sky looks to be. Overall a nice picture though, good job!
PROS:
very good natural posing
good build
nice concept, planning is pretty rare for a subject and i like to see it
CONS:
lighting, as natural as it is, has kind of muted your pose. i'd make it more dynamic.
the one dude on the left who's blocked by the foreground dude. while that makes it more realistic, it does muddle your shot to have characters mostly obscured by others. i'd make the foreground guy more of an implication at the far border.
Yeah I kinda thought the same thing about the guy in the left being blocked but forgot about it later... I was also very unsure on how to handel lighting and shadows so I'm gonna keep that in mind next time
Great natural posing and finger posing, lighting could be more realistic though, only complaint I have. Do you know how to use soft lamps? that would really help here. The grass and vegetation is too green for example, with softer and more dark lighting and stronger light rays it would look more realistic.
stronger contrast is needed between light and shadow.
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