https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LjFp02gQVUM
The author is looking for constructive criticism.
Looking for feedback eh? Well, hope someone manages to relay my opinion:
Voice is too flat and dry. I'm not a voice acting instructor so idk how to make it better.
This isn't a review, this is a diary. Reviews comb thru the notable game systems, explain basic game loops, briefs the synopsis and generally provide just enough information to get the viewer interested in knowing the (objective/subjective) strengths and flaws of the product. The viewer expects to understand whether the game would b a fit for them.
If there isn't an interest in doing the video in the style of reviews, rename the series to something else, like "So I played...".
That said, content need brevity and pacing. If there is a footage can convey an idea or empathize a point, show don't tell, and let the clip run for more than 2 seconds.
This person isn't interesting, knowledgeable or charismatic enough for me to care about his nitpicks before anyone else. I suggest finding a strong trait and focus on refining it, cut the other crap temporarily if needed.
I watched his DBZ vid and spotted the same pattern. Good luck!
Cant you just comment on the video
I don't feel like logging into my Youtube Account, sorry. Just pretend that I was rambling at a wall.
Yeah and don't use a thumbnail like "(Blank) is Bad!". That just screams clickbait.
You want constructive criticism? This is an obviously biased review with a clickbait thumbnail.
This is a less a "review" and more of an "opinion piece".
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