I usually enjoy your style but this feels like low effort next to your old pics tbh
how so?
Nah I really like this because its based on that one scene from Max Payne 3, it makes sense to be this small scale
The fire's motion blur is pointing directly upwards uniformly and its blend with the tires (that don't seem to be burning) is also just a regular fade in transparency (so it doesn't look very interesting)
https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/710/01c1dd80-f31e-4a15-86ec-53ace3044f87/image.png
the fire itself doesn't seem to be casting lights on the scene (and if they are their directions dont make sense)
https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/710/09d4052f-4be5-416b-8b86-ca802d3c1dc0/image.png
this dude's face looks a bit too comical, the gasoline being poured is too transparent so its barely noticeable and the patches of grass are a little too obvious, and all of this just creates a weird atmosphere
now looking at this old work:
https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/112165/73dead73-fe10-4667-a0c2-8d9517daa724/rpi.jpg
The fire looks amazing, draws its lights, the shadows are clear, and the atmosphere is absolutely mastered, the posing is sensible and believable, there is no comparison imo
yeah i had trouble finding resources for the type of flame i wanted in this shot, so i just gave up and half-arsed it.
thanks for the feedback
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