• Asche zu Asche
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cE6Wqnwv1to I doubt Tiger I will turn to ashes. Enjoy and I will appreciate any C&C. http://www.wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/ade7f131be77.jpg
I really love the colors here and the scenery is interesting as well, good shadow too, my only C&C is I would make sure to better 'attach' the fire to the actual geometry of the tank (you gotta hide your tracks if you're using fire pics from other images): https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/710/01106f2e-f05b-4647-94d5-898a0643891a/image.png you can tell that that ^ was done a bit lazily, the fire shape doesnt make sense. i'd also add some more smoke coming out of the fire and make sure it's illuminated by the fire (doesnt seem to be the case)
Yeah, the fire and smoke. I still do need a lot of practising regarding that. I will defo try better next time. After all, thats why I share my pieces.
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