Sometimes it's a good to ride in night. So atmospheric...
And another "lore-poster" for "Players' Stand" story.
https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/184437/4bfa9a93-cecc-4571-9825-ae7ad3970eb2/gm_nightride.jpg
I feel like the fact you left the car to transition into sheer black near the front is a serious mistake. I know that real-world night roads are, indeed, pitch-black, but almost every subject in a night scene of a movie is back-lit, and for a very good reason: real life night is very boring.
Here, the car is almost completely invisible, and though the night sky serves to add some atmosphere, the fact we're basically just seeing a car's windows floating through the void alongside a wheel-arch and a set of headlights completely shatters any sense of mood.
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