• Red Sands
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https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/183687/5010117d-b8c8-4cd8-8372-1861334b10d5/a_redsands_seiren.jpg Part of a small series of scenes I've made titled 'No Man's Land' This was originally supposed a scene taking place in Mars, if you want to intepret that, then do so, I usually leave the setting of my art for interpretation.
You should try using some fog editors for a bit of atmospheric depth, it'd help to break up the foreground and background. Also I'd recommend not using that rifle model, it's wayyyy too shiny
I didn't even think of that fog editors at the time, wish I did, could of improved the pic. The rifle models were all I had at the time, and I wanted to put actual weapons on the ground, I did try to hide the shine they give off, but it's still too obvious.
Those explosion effects are straight-up ugly with how they're not blended into the scenery at all, and their perspective is really off. The color balance of the image is also a downright eyesore.
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