I feel like the shadowing should be more harsh. The posing is good, but it could deal with more spine motility. The guy on the left could be more hunched into the lighter. Like, pick up your phone and hold it in the same place he is -- you'd be leaning your upper spine and neck into it,
right? To catch the flame. Being stock rigid like that with neck only movement is a bit unrealistic. The center guy also is a bit too stiff. He could be more hunched, more "heroic" or at least more action-focused.
As it stands though, it's a good picture. Just grind on those details.
Sorry, you need to Log In to post a reply to this thread.
