• Hoverboard Thieves
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DSVDcw6iW8 Couple of outlaws on the run with their fancy hoverboards just moments after robbing a nearby shop If you're interested in more of my work checkout my DA page: https://www.deviantart.com/redline2311 Sometimes i stream my scenebuilding sessions you can check out for those on my youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GTAMyth2311 Thanks for stopping by, have a nice day!  https://files.facepunch.com/forum/upload/285660/453594e3-5809-4cda-83b8-b67c4c790096/hoverboard thieves.png
Everything is good about this, but the terrain underneath the purple lights from the hooverboards is too bright (the one with the blurred tire). You could just darken it all to make the viewers eye shift more towards the center of the piece. Try putting your index finger horizontally infront of your eye and blocking the light gray bottom terrain patch, you'll see what I mean.
Thank you! I get what you mean and il watch out for that kind of stuff the next time i do something like this. The only reason i used those lights in first place was beacuse of the composition
I think you fucked up with the fog but the glowings and that really little grain effect we can see make the whole thing better you shouldve give the characters a facial expression but it does look good
I used the white fog because i though background was kind of flat without it, maybe i should have painted it, il keep that in mind for the next time, Thank you!
I think you should post it without the fog because i don't think it'd look flat without it '^^
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