Map(s)
Rp_Downtown_V2
Title:Trouble in Terrorist Town: Not just any town.
*Clock tower bell rings*
Empty streets (pan around them for a bit)
Pans around to PD, a detective (dressed as combine) walks out
Intent murmering in the background
A dead body has been found up an alleyway (The one near the PD)
As the body is being inspected, a man runs past the entrance of the alley
The detective runs after him.
Next thing we know, the traitor comes driving down the road very fast barley missing the detective and hitting a crowd of bystanders (about 3 people)
Detective walks over.
Starts inspecting the bodies...
All of a sudden, he gets knifed in the back!
*Pan upwards*(Gta SA style)
The quote "And suddenly, they all looked less human, they reverted to more bestial types" is played.
*Display title*
--End of scene 1--
Just finished scene 2, posting soon, this will be a machinima type video, discuss...
Terrible idea.
This would be good had this been original.
It isnt done, but either way the reason of me posting this was to get opinions of the community, so I could save time if I got a negative response
Sounds interesting. I'd like to see the end result.
Yes, I'd still watch it. Anyone can use the same ideas, it's how you present those ideas. Take the unoriginal idea, and turn it into something good.
Ill post act 2 tonight
Map: Rp_Downtown_V2
Location: Building next to yellow warehouse - Basement
Setting: 3 red spys in basement looking at a tv
A tv screen is in the basement
A red pyro can be seen in the screen
"You have three have chosen to be traitors, and to betray you comrades.
You must kill all who are not here now.
You have been provided with 2 credits, use them well.
Use stealth and ingenuity to complete your objective."
Location: PD - Mayors office
Setting: A CP is standing infront of a tv screen.
A tv screen is on the mayors desk.
A silloette of a blue pyro is seen on the screen.
"You are a detective, annihilate all traitors;
and susspect everyone until proven innocent.
You have been provided with one credit, use it well."
*both screens side by side*
"Let the game begin."
--Cut to black--
Bear in mind this is just the first draft.
Man this sounds fairly boring and doesn't really pull my attention.
Unless the visuals are amazing or something, maybe a free coupon.
[QUOTE=Frank West;32184477]Man this sounds fairly boring and doesn't really pull my attention.
Unless the visuals are amazing or something, maybe a free coupon.[/QUOTE]
Well its a working progress, not even in alpha yet
Btw just finished the ending, now all I need to do is finish the main part ¬_¬
Hei, what help exactly you need? :)
[QUOTE=kenchbrothers;32186101]Hei, what help exactly you need? :)[/QUOTE]
Actors and shit, but I would like you to be the cameraman because of the quality of your Alyx Vance machinima
So, you want to make movie on your script? if so, add me in skype shokboy, and we will discuss all. :)
Can I be the guy that gets hit by the car? I think i'd be great for that part.
[QUOTE=Crawfordo;32197505]Can I be the guy that gets hit by the car? I think i'd be great for that part.[/QUOTE]
If you must know it will be a train not a car...
what the fuck is this
this sounds like it'll be just as bad as the alyx one. we don't need to be alerted everytime someone makes a "first video". Show it to your friends, get feedback, make it semi-decent, then release it.
It's the fucking mapping section all over again.
i take that back.
TTT on Rp_downtown_v2?
Do it mappers
[QUOTE=thelurker1234;32204013]TTT on Rp_downtown_v2?
Do it mappers[/QUOTE]
Wasnt my idea, did a vote with a few communities a while back, this thing has been in production since Febuary but nothing more was added from about March til now.
Btw I am in need of actors for this when I finish the script, and I may need an editor and cameraman.
I should just be doing production and director stuff, may act a bit as well.
sounds pretty cool
Kinda interested to see how this turns out, but i doubt that this well ever be finished/decent if I look around on your youtube channel.
[QUOTE=Sylerr;32255775]Kinda interested to see how this turns out, but i doubt that this well ever be finished/decent if I look around on your youtube channel.[/QUOTE]
Most of my stuff on youtube was edited n the best of an hour dont go by that
but come to think of it yur probably right, it probably will never be finished, but if it comes to that I will still post the whole script incase anyone else wants to try to finish it.
Nearly finished the script after nearly a year of putting it off :D
All i need now are actors and editors
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