The Underdog Paradise - Movie Scene Preview - READ !!! - Garry's Mod

[B]Hello Facepuncher's & Gmodders !![/B] [highlight]Red Dragon Movies' New Project,[/highlight] [i][b]THE UNDERDOG PARADISE[/b][/i] After Watching the all inspiring WOTS (War Of The Servers) The cast had brought together the key parts of gmod and blended them all together to make one hell of a film. The Serious yet dark comedy storeyline inspired myself to work on a new project. Of course I wouldn't have been able to do it on my own, so I called on my clan of 400+ and managed to pick a creative, enthusiastic and skilled cast of people to help me out. [B]The Movie[/B] [I]A Backalley Gangster Film, follows an Ex-Mafia Hitman that looses his memory after a car crash, He then realises that he spent his time devoted to crime and murder. He puts down his mafia hit list and picks up a police most wanted list. The story is a serious sprinkled with a hint of dark humor.[/I] [B]We are aiming to make the video atleast 1 hour 30 mins long :D[/B] [b]PLEASE WATCH THE VIDEO BELOW[/b] [highlight]Tell Me what you think of it and how I can make it better.[/highlight] [B][I]WE ARE ALSO LOOKING FOR SOME MORE PEOPLE TO TAKE PART, IF YOU THINK YOU CAN ACT, message me. IF YOU THINK YOU COULD HELP US OUT[/I][/B] [highlight]Please Message Me!!![/highlight] [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qtel7XC1plQ[/url] RATE, COMMENT, SUBSCRIBE !! p.s Please Ignore the title etc.. I just cut abit out and slapped into Windows Movie maker :D The real scene is gonna be some Sony Vegas Edited Sh#t. [B]Thanks For Reading !![/B]

Camera work is terrible and too jerky Acting is terrible because there practically isn't any Effects are terrible because the only one you used was gaussian blur which didn't make it feel like a POV shot And the scene was drawn out way too much. You could have informed the viewer "this guy's been hurt, there are medics" in about 20 seconds. WOTS worked as a Gmod machinima because it was tounge-in-cheek, and was a parody of Gmod itself.

[QUOTE=CoolCorky;21474428]Camera work is terrible and too jerky Acting is terrible because there practically isn't any Effects are terrible because the only one you used was gaussian blur which didn't make it feel like a POV shot And the scene was drawn out way too much. You could have informed the viewer "this guy's been hurt, there are medics" in about 20 seconds. WOTS worked as a Gmod machinima because it was tounge-in-cheek, and was a parody of Gmod itself.[/QUOTE] Ye but what you just said Is exactly what I needed, thanks m8 :D [editline]12:32AM[/editline] Honest opinions the guy above is video making hitler, conidering some of his vids on youtube are also terrible :D

Maybe so, but I'm not trying to make a 90-minute-long epic.

[QUOTE=Dragon Master;21474463]Ye but what you just said Is exactly what I needed, thanks m8 :D [editline]12:32AM[/editline] Honest opinions the guy above is video making hitler, conidering some of his vids on youtube are also terrible :D[/QUOTE] He is completely correct. If you're trying to be serious, you need some serious GMod skills, because GMod rarely looks serious. The scene is long and draw out, and completely pointless. The audio sucks and feels completely unrelated to the scene, and the camera movement is jerky.

That gave no indication as to what the scene was. There's a police car by an open van, and an injured man is being treated by a medic. With disembodied police-y radio chatter in the background. I shouldn't have had to read your OP to find out it was a car crash. Why is the medic dressed like he's in a rag-tag team of rebels? What's the police car doing there, and if there are officers in why aren't they doing anything to try and help the injured person? It was too long as well. Boring. Do something different or end the scene.

First of all terrible camerawork, i recommend you use the catmull camera addon or however its called for smoother results. Second, you could see the ropes attaching the lights. A simple fix would be right click with light tool then easy wield to police car. Another thing, i did not understand anything exept that a person is on the ground and theirs a medic healing him, i dont even know if he is alive or not.

[QUOTE=CoolCorky;21474428]Camera work is terrible and too jerky Acting is terrible because there practically isn't any Effects are terrible because the only one you used was gaussian blur which didn't make it feel like a POV shot And the scene was drawn out way too much. You could have informed the viewer "this guy's been hurt, there are medics" in about 20 seconds. WOTS worked as a Gmod machinima because it was tounge-in-cheek, and was a parody of Gmod itself.[/QUOTE] I agree with this whole post.