[video=youtube;19oIRRvVB2A]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=19oIRRvVB2A[/video]
I appreciate any feedback I receive. :)
Reminded me of
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=umPE5q1hH0k[/media]
I'm finding it really, really meh. You missed so many main factors that it hurts. Seems like you put a bunch of effort into it, which is good but you missed the point so to speak. Let me try to list it below:
[b]The idea.[/b] Eh. The idea is seriously overused and becoming more unfunny by each day that passes. Try to get an original idea instead of laying a big video in some random-GMod video.
[b]Copyrighted content[/b] It might be God damn hard to avoid, but try at least. It's way better in the long run. Especially [b]memes[/b] from copyrighted stuff, such as the Mario's "Spaghetti". It's overused and unfunny. If you want to pull off stuff like that one, it needs to be done pretty damn good as it's so overused.
[b]The quality[/b] The quality was OK. Could have needed some better animations, especially facial, but it was OK overall.
Could have used less mainstream music / content.
[b]Excecution[/b]: To be honest, the original ones as The Idiots of Garry's Mod were pretty funny (and they somewhat still are). But all these type of ripoffs are becoming slightly annoying. Obviously the idea is there, but it was horribly excecuted.
[b]Conclusion[/b] [i]Stay away from the idea of making a 'Random GMod' video.[/i]
That was terrible sorry.
[b]Copyrighted content[/b] It might be God damn hard to avoid, but try at least. It's way better in the long run. Especially [b]memes[/b] from copyrighted stuff, such as the Mario's "Spaghetti". It's overused and unfunny. If you want to pull off stuff like that one, it needs to be done pretty damn good as it's so overused.
Sometimes repetition is funny. In this case it doesn't matter the amount you overuse. The Youtube poop community is considered the stupidest of its breed. I tried to reach out towards that type of audience as well.
[quote=ehholepro]Sometimes repetition is funny.[/quote]
The thing is, that repetition isn't funny [i]here[/i] as it was excecuted badly with a coat of memes on. The idea is overused. The originals were the ones which were actually funny to a degree. This is basically just like watching any other 'random GMod screwaround video' and not something new, even within this type of genre.
It wasn't [i]that[/i] bad, some small parts made me laugh. It wasn't [i]great[/i] though, and to be honest I would maybe only watch one more if you made another. I'll be friendly, 6/10.
That was bloody awful.
[QUOTE=ehholepro's First thread]
[URL="http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1110142-Garry-s-Mod-Gunfight-Montage"]http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1110142-Garry-s-Mod-Gunfight-Montage[/URL]
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my expectations where met.
[QUOTE=ChuckR;31457819][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/dLOHu.png[/IMG]
my expectations where met.[/QUOTE]
Somebody really keeps a lot of Sh*t.
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31458183]Somebody really keeps a lot of Sh*t.[/QUOTE]
somebody makes bad videos and capitalizes and censors their fucking cursewords
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31454286]The Youtube poop community is considered the stupidest of its breed. I tried to reach out towards that type of audience as well.[/QUOTE]
You overshot it.
Wow, I actually just watched this pile of shit on youtube. You guys were right to criticize, this is bad. Fucking sony vegas is a piece of fucking garbage. And no Lebowski I'm not just swearing because you posted some gay response I'm doing it to fuckin show how pissed I am, I hate sony vegas with a fuckin passion. Half way through the video it went all out of sync and shit and now looks shitty. It takes the comedy away from most of it. I'm sick and tired of sony vegas acting up. I had to render this pile of shit like 8 times. Why even waste the time?
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31458368]Wow, I actually just watched this pile of shit on youtube. You guys were right to criticize, this is bad. Fucking sony vegas is a piece of fucking garbage. And no Lebowski I'm not just swearing because you posted some gay response I'm doing it to fuckin show how pissed I am, I hate sony vegas with a fuckin passion. Half way through the video it went all out of sink and shit and now looks shitty. It takes the comedy away from most of it. I'm sick and tired of sony vegas acting up. I had to render this pile of shit like 8 times. Why even waste the time?[/QUOTE]
No it's more like that you had bad ideas, bad execution, and a bad program.
Wasn't the program's fault for bad ideas, and bad execution.
That was all your own.
~You're bad at backpedaling~
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31458368]Wow, I actually just watched this pile of shit on youtube. You guys were right to criticize, this is bad. Fucking sony vegas is a piece of fucking garbage. And no Lebowski I'm not just swearing because you posted some gay response I'm doing it to fuckin show how pissed I am, I hate sony vegas with a fuckin passion. Half way through the video it went all out of sink and shit and now looks shitty. It takes the comedy away from most of it. I'm sick and tired of sony vegas acting up. I had to render this pile of shit like 8 times. Why even waste the time?[/QUOTE]
You are cursing to appear more mature, but it doesn't help. And don't blame the paintbrush because the artist's painting looks like crap.
[QUOTE=Loriborn;31458420]You are cursing to appear more mature, but it doesn't help. And don't blame the paintbrush because the artist's painting looks like crap.[/QUOTE]
The paintbrush looks like SHIT!
Also, ever heard of moderation?
You fuckin know when you goddamn curse all the shitty fuckin god damn mother whore fucking time it gets really fucking annoying to sift through all the dog-fucking extraneous shit to get to the fucking message.
[editline]31st July 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31458442]The paintbrush looks like SHIT![/QUOTE]
And here my good friends is where you can see the deterioration of the OP's posting because he has no valid response in mind.
[QUOTE=Lebowski;31458448]Also, ever heard of moderation?
You fuckin know when you goddamn curse all the shitty fuckin god damn mother whore fucking time it gets really fucking annoying to sift through all the dog-fucking extraneous shit to get to the fucking message.
[editline]31st July 2011[/editline]
And here my good friends is where you can see the deterioration of the OP's posting because he has no valid response in mind.[/QUOTE]
Yes I do! (Gabe Newell)
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31458509]Yes I do! (Gabe Newell)[/QUOTE]
Subject has reached phase 2 of posting deterioration syndrome.
His higher functions have begun to slowly start their shutdown.
[QUOTE=Lebowski;31458539]Subject has reached phase 2 of posting deterioration syndrome.
His higher functions have begun to slowly start their shutdown.[/QUOTE]
You guys try too hard to push people's buttons.
[QUOTE=ehholepro;31458556]You guys try too hard to push people's buttons.[/QUOTE]
Subject has retreated to phase 1 and is showing signs of improvement, complete eradication of the issue will be evident by the patient expressing no interest in creating further videos.
[QUOTE=Lebowski;31458582]Subject has retreated to phase 1 and is showing signs of improvement, complete eradication of the issue will be evident by the patient expressing no interest in creating further videos.[/QUOTE]
Dammit! Now how am I gonna follow that one up?
Listen up man. In the start we tried to help you, I even made a list on stuff that you should notice about the video and how to make it better. And what do we get back? Yes, I realize people started going "This is horrible" but there's a good reason for it. [i]The video is horrible.[/i] I personally tried to help you but you took no notice of it and started shitting on the other people in the thread. Then came up with lame excuses and bad memes such as the Gabe Newell "Yes I do" thing.
Swearing won't make you a better man. It won't make you mature. It [i]won't[/i] make you look good. Swear wisely and don't guss around.
And last of all, stop blaming that this is the programs fault. It's not. If it's out of sync, then it's [b]YOU[/b] who edited something in the rendering process to make it out of sync. I heard several people having this issue when they either pirated it or had a really lowend computer.
At least take some of the peoples advice and constructive critisizm for good. Completely ignoring it, then trying to act mature by cussing everywhere won't work.
[QUOTE=Jackpody;31458717]Listen up man. In the start we tried to help you, I even made a list on stuff that you should notice about the video and how to make it better. And what do we get back? Yes, I realize people started going "This is horrible" but there's a good reason for it. [i]The video is horrible.[/i] I personally tried to help you but you took no notice of it and started shitting on the other people in the thread. Then came up with lame excuses and bad memes such as the Gabe Newell "Yes I do" thing.
Swearing won't make you a better man. It won't make you mature. It [i]won't[/i] make you look good. Swear wisely and don't guss around.
And last of all, stop blaming that this is the programs fault. It's not. If it's out of sync, then it's [b]YOU[/b] who edited something in the rendering process to make it out of sync. I heard several people having this issue when they either pirated it or had a really lowend computer.
At least take some of the peoples advice and constructive critisizm for good. Completely ignoring it, then trying to act mature by cussing everywhere won't work.[/QUOTE]
Sorry, let me go back.
[editline]31st July 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=Jackpody;31453925]I'm finding it really, really meh. You missed so many main factors that it hurts. Seems like you put a bunch of effort into it, which is good but you missed the point so to speak. Let me try to list it below:
[b]The idea.[/b] Eh. The idea is seriously overused and becoming more unfunny by each day that passes. Try to get an original idea instead of laying a big video in some random-GMod video.
[b]Copyrighted content[/b] It might be God damn hard to avoid, but try at least. It's way better in the long run. Especially [b]memes[/b] from copyrighted stuff, such as the Mario's "Spaghetti". It's overused and unfunny. If you want to pull off stuff like that one, it needs to be done pretty damn good as it's so overused.
[b]The quality[/b] The quality was OK. Could have needed some better animations, especially facial, but it was OK overall.
Could have used less mainstream music / content.
[b]Excecution[/b]: To be honest, the original ones as The Idiots of Garry's Mod were pretty funny (and they somewhat still are). But all these type of ripoffs are becoming slightly annoying. Obviously the idea is there, but it was horribly excecuted.
[b]Conclusion[/b] [i]Stay away from the idea of making a 'Random GMod' video.[/i][/QUOTE]
Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate your support. You may not think you are supporting me but you are. I take note of everthing everyone tells me about anything I do.
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