• "But, w-why me? I only had 20 dollars on me..."
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[quote]... It's not fair! What the fuck is he going to do with 20 dollars?! Is that all I'm worth, 20 stinking dollars?! Crying and getting upset isn't going to help, Claire. How can you be so calm about this?! I've taken millions of peoples lives, Claire. You get used to it after a while. I hope this scumbag gets it good! His time will come, that I'm sure of. Now, before we go, is there anything you want to know? If this would not have happened, what would have happened to me? It's easier for you if I do not answer that question. I hate you, I hate all of this! It's not fair! Everyone has their time, Claire. Are you ready? For what? You'll see...[/quote] [img]http://uppix.net/c/9/f/02d4ac3505b854fc63b4fd893654e.jpg[/img]
The Ghost effect could have been better and the camera angle kinda leaves wasted space and shazzle.
Very empty and the ghost effect does look a bit lazy.
He must have a really busy job or there are more like him :v:
[QUOTE=Haxxer;25536335]He must have a really busy job or there are more like him :v:[/QUOTE] busiest there is! and yes, the ghost effect is lazy AS FUCK, but i had no idea what else to dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Continue this. I wanna see where it goes really badly.
[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;25536461]Continue this. I wanna see where it goes really badly.[/QUOTE] I agree with this if you don't, I will fly out to your country and shank you.
Balls this is cool. I'm with Halfy up above me.
SHANK IS A GOOD THING, RIGHT? Right?
It's slicing you up
Pfft, it's extreme hugging. With a knife.
in his stomach
[QUOTE=Zeraxify;25536719]SHANK IS A GOOD THING, RIGHT? Right?[/QUOTE] Yes it is It's like Shag but with a knife. and it's usually aimed at your vital organs.
The dialouge is pretty awkard and unatural.. The pic is not bad tho, and I don't think the ghost effect is too bad.
Dead girls make me sad. I don't know why, they just do.
I love the idea. Execution not so much. There's nothing really wrong with it, but it could have been better.
it looks very lazily done i expected more from you
i have a confession to make. i was really lazy with this one :(
I can't say I like this image, the background possibly is why this is not appealing to me at all, Francis is posed strangely, and why would he flip off the dead girl after he walked 10-20 fee from her unless he somehow see's her ghost? It just does not feel right for me at all.
[B]I hate ghosts.[/B]
Grim Reaper sure did clean himself up pretty good. And you guys don't get jokes anymore. :(
[QUOTE=demoniclemon;25538505]I can't say I like this image, the background possibly is why this is not appealing to me at all, Francis is posed strangely, and why would he flip off the dead girl after he walked 10-20 fee from her unless he somehow see's her ghost? It just does not feel right for me at all.[/QUOTE] What? he isn't flipping her off, he's just holding his pistol
hahahha flipping her off hahah that would be funny as hell "HEY GURL, I JUST KILLED YOU. FUCK YO GHOST, BITCH"
[QUOTE=HWECQI;25538920]What? he isn't flipping her off, he's just holding his pistol[/QUOTE] Must be the library computers making it look a little dark for me, and the finger just seemed at the middle when I first looked, but still, one detail I got wrong still doesn't make me like the image any more.
The posing on Francis is what I don't really like. Just doesn't seem too right to me. Other than that I like it. I like the idea (:v:) and everything. Goodsies.
looks like she took a nap Grabbing her boob
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