A small comic I did for the Bday of a very good friend.

[Spongmana]

Well, Its my first comic ever, I made it for my friend's Bday (Duh).
He actually requested it, the reason I'm going to post it is that I'm planning a small comic series soon and would like tips on what to improve etc.

I kept the panels at a random resolution because I though 1680x1050 might be to big.
[img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Comic_for_Gentlemans_bday_D.jpg[/img_thumb]

Direct link if thumb won't work for ya:
[url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Comic_for_Gentlemans_bday_D.jpg[/url]
Now I would really appreciate some good tips/C&C instead of a flaming storm.
Don't hurt me!

[Scarfulhu]

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kbLTpB2dd_A[/media]
Based off this.

Thanks mate, you did this well.

[Joazzz]

I was expecting to see Borg :saddowns:

[MadmanMad]

Is there a midget making out with a dinosuar near the heavy?

What in the name of...

[Scarfulhu]

Correction, it's a puppet making out with a raptor.

[Reno360]

There was no banana! I was lied to!

[Spongmana]

[QUOTE=Reno360;19733745]There was no banana! I was lied to![/QUOTE]

Don't worry, Ozzy [i] always has his banana for you [/i]

I would insert a pic of Ozzy with a smug emote smile but he has no faceposing :C

Do you'll have to do with this:
:smug: