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Is it considered wasted space on the far right? If so I can crop it.
Angle is nice, and the posing on the germans is ok, but the posing on the right arm of the american is too close to his chest.
[QUOTE=Santz;19967205]Angle is nice, and the posing on the germans is ok, but the posing on the right arm of the american is too close to his chest.[/QUOTE]
You're right. Just noticed the clipping on his right are with his chest. Sorry about that.
He's gonna throw a smoke at there faces... it could've atleast been a grenade.
Something fishy is going on up in here.
Dem boys are gonna rejoice and say its okay to be gay.
Is he cross-eyed?
He ain't from Cleveland that's for sure.
[QUOTE=Camarilla;19967403]He's gonna throw a smoke at there faces... it could've atleast been a grenade.[/QUOTE]
Throw the smoke to distract them then shoot em up.
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[QUOTE=CabooseRvB;19967446]Is he cross-eyed?[/QUOTE]
I guess so.
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[QUOTE=Sottalytober;19967718]Throw the smoke to distract them then shoot em up.[/QUOTE]
Smoke grenades take a moment to set off and old smoke grenades only gradually disperse their contents. So the Germans would be like "shit grenade! wait, the fuck is this?" and then blast the yank while he tries to fight back.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;19978015]Smoke grenades take a moment to set off and old smoke grenades only gradually disperse their contents. So the Germans would be like "shit grenade! wait, the fuck is this?" and then blast the yank while he tries to fight back.[/QUOTE]
If you threw it over there heads and near the wall it would distract them enough to pop out and light them up.
I'm pretty sure they'd just see you in their peripheral vision and ignore the smoke grenade.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;19981813]I'm pretty sure they'd just see you in their peripheral vision and ignore the smoke grenade.[/QUOTE]
Well you're just impossible. :colbert:
Realism...
Posing is stiff and unrealistic.
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And why does it seem like an enlisted man be (what looks like) questioning an officer?
[QUOTE=Punkrock77;19988074]Posing is stiff and unrealistic.
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And why does it seem like an enlisted man be (what looks like) questioning an officer?[/QUOTE]
I disagree on the posing and that "officer" is just a sniper :hehe:
[quote]And why does it seem like an enlisted man be (what looks like) questioning an officer?[/QUOTE]
He could be like one of those epic dudes... on war movies, where the officers decision got his men killed and stuff.
[QUOTE=Sottalytober;19967718]Throw the smoke to distract them then shoot em up.[/QUOTE]
What's the need for smoke? The germans are unarmed.
[QUOTE=Gor Feri;19991397]What's the need for smoke? The germans are unarmed.[/QUOTE]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/spade.jpg[/img]
:ohdear:
The posing is still trash.
Youre starting to be annoying like Zilo.
[QUOTE=The Combine;19993756]The posing is still trash.
Youre starting to be annoying like Zilo.[/QUOTE]
A: Who the hell is Zilo?
B: I think that the only bad posing is on the American's right arm. I think the Germans are posed well enough and so do other posters apparently.
C: You're starting to get annoying. You attempt to criticize things that aren't wrong. Example, my current TF2 picture in the front page.
We're criticizing to help you make your pictures better and if you won't take that, then your pictures will still be trash and un-realistic. 'Nuff said.
Sottalytober, you never seem to learn. This is just like the Dutchguy at the beginning, always making the same mistakes over and over again, get your shit together man.
Also, nothing against you Dutchie<3 You did some things in the past, but that's a part of the past :3:
[QUOTE=Camarilla;20000430]We're criticizing to help you make your pictures better and if you won't take that, then your pictures will still be trash and un-realistic. 'Nuff said.[/QUOTE]
I appreciate critism. I do not appreaciate The Combine critism. He gives it horribly, blindly, and I'm pretty sure he doesn't even read thread titles.
He's giving correct criticism, your posing is trash. Look at all the criticism comments and :eng101: from it and you'll get better.
[QUOTE=Zeraxify;20000517]Sottalytober, you never seem to learn. This is just like the Dutchguy at the beginning, always making the same mistakes over and over again, get your shit together man.
Also, nothing against you Dutchie<3 You did some things in the past, but that's a part of the past :3:[/QUOTE]
I will admit, I do make some mistakes over and over again, it's one of my faults. I just don't see what's so bad about this picture. In my eyes I see three problems. The arm in which the soldier is holding his gun is a bit to straight, that was kinda on purpose so that the Thompson wouldn't block the view of the Germans, but I still could have bent it. The arm in which the American has the smoke grenade is clipping with his chest, and three, the German on the left appears to be slight leaning forward. That's all I see and I don't see those as horrible mistakes.
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[QUOTE=Camarilla;20000678]He's giving correct criticism, your posing is trash. Look at all the criticism comments and :eng101: from it and you'll get better.[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=The Combine;19991871]Posing on the engineer is unrealistic and the soldier looks very stiff(nobody sits that straight).
The low-poly guys are just dumb.May not be your fault tough.[/QUOTE]
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A+ criticism from Combine there.
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